ESL Essay, Writing Worldhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/EslEssayWritingWorld/Forum9.htmPost your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment or just read for fun.enCSMOD (Build: 3260.39585)Re: please check my essayhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckMyEssay/vnqkd/post.htm#402750Fri, 10 Aug 2007 08:04:56 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:402750Anonymous0http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckMyEssay/vnqkd/post.htm#402750http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-402750.xmlVery Good, Indeed<div style="clear:both;"></div>Re: please check my essayhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckMyEssay/vcphn/post.htm#348377Sun, 08 Apr 2007 14:38:09 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:348377Anonymous1http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckMyEssay/vcphn/post.htm#348377http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-348377.xml<P>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; I am Brandon. My full name is Brandon Joannes. But you can call me Don. I am 10 years old and live in Tambunan, Sabah, Malaysia. I am the second old in my family because I have 1 sister, 2 younger sisters and a baby brother. I go to school every Monday to Friday. My school's name is Sekolah Rendah&nbsp;Jenis Kebangsaan (cina) Yuh Min Tambunan. I have many friends at my school like Aldo, Adrian, Dickson, Eric and many more. </P> <P>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; I can tell you more but I have to go now, see you later!!</P><div style="clear:both;"></div>Re: please check my essayhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckMyEssay/dvhcz/post.htm#272277Tue, 26 Sep 2006 04:44:42 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:272277Anonymous2http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckMyEssay/dvhcz/post.htm#272277http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-272277.xml<P>Dear Hawa, </P> <P>A good try anyway considering the fact that you did not get to do your education in the English medium.</P> <P>Yes, there are mistakes eg. there are a lot of mistakes but as human beings... but the point is to keeping trying.</P> <P>Best wishes.</P><div style="clear:both;"></div>please check my essayhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckMyEssay/crjbc/post.htmWed, 14 Dec 2005 03:44:01 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:169662Hawa Tesl3http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckMyEssay/crjbc/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-169662.xml<P><STRONG>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; <U>MY LIFE</U></STRONG></P> <P>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;My life begins when&nbsp;I was born in 3rd May 1987 in Kuala Terengganu.I am the youngest member in my family. I have 5 brothers and 5 sisters. I live in a simple family, which is not too rich or too poor. My childhood is like other kids.But the best moment in my childhood is when a stewardess praised me, "How cute&nbsp;you are". For me, it is nothing because what&nbsp;I have today not a permenant, it is only temporary.&nbsp;</P> <P>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;When&nbsp;I was six years old, I went to the kindergarten which is located near to my house. I have a lot of friends when in the kindergarten stage. There are&nbsp;people who are kind, sweet and also the&nbsp;bad one. But, i enjoy my kindergaten life&nbsp;because i involved actively in the co-curicullar activities like dancing and singing.</P> <P>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Standard one, i&nbsp;continued my study in&nbsp;Ladang&nbsp;Primary School&nbsp;whish also located&nbsp;near to my house.I often go to&nbsp;school by walking with my friends. I finished my study in that school untill the end of my standard six after the UPSR. I felt so sad&nbsp;because i am&nbsp;get only&nbsp;3A and 2B.</P> <P>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;But i still continued my study to the&nbsp;Khairiah Islamic Secondary School&nbsp;untill the end of my PMR. I am so happy because i got 8A and&nbsp;1B for the examination.It is out of my target. Then, with my great result I applied to study at the Mara Junior Science College. After the result, i got the answer and&nbsp;go to the Mara Junior Science College in Kuantan. I studied there only&nbsp;two years till my final examination in my school life.</P> <P>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;After the SPM, i applied to further study in many&nbsp;institutions but, i hard to get the best one only with my ordinary result. Luckily, i got the offer&nbsp;to further my study&nbsp;at KUSZA in Terengganu in the Diploma of Tesl. Before that, i got the offer to do medical course in Ukraine, but i refused it because&nbsp; it is too far from my hometown.&nbsp;Untill now, i stay in KUSZA and try to finish my study here with all my friends.</P> <P>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;So, this is about all my life from my childhood&nbsp;untill now.I hope my life will continue&nbsp;smoothly and happy untill the end of my life in this world.</P> <P><STRONG>ATTENTION: PLEASE CHECK MY ESSAY FOR ME..I KNOW IT IS A LOT OF&nbsp;MISTAKE,BUT AS HUMAN WE MUST LEARN FROM OUR MISTAKES,RIGHT!!!</STRONG></P> <P>&nbsp;</P><div style="clear:both;"></div>