http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htmPost your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment, or just read for fun.enXMOD (Build: 3616.28671)http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectEssayOnlineGame/cghgg/post.htmFri, 27 Feb 2009 06:10:42 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:198651Marianat0http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectEssayOnlineGame/cghgg/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-198651.xmlHello, please read this essay which I made up because I want to improve my writing. It would be great if you could correct it or give me some feedback about how to improve it. Thanks! Runescape is an online role-playing game. The player controls one character and plays the role of that character in the game. Runescape has better graphics than most other role-playing games that I have seen. It is a multiplayer game which means that you can meet other players, chat with them, or trade with the other players. The best thing about Runescape is that you can play it for free; if you choose, you can pay a few dollars per month to get some extra features. I personally like Runescape, but I don’t play it that much anymore because...