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Re: Please check for me!!!

nona the brit — Sun, 26 Feb 2006 09:14:13 GMT

My elementary school classmate, Branda, came back from Japan during the winter vacation. She moved to Japan after she graduated from elementary school almost ten years ago.

Every time she tells me she will back, I got a (?) mind. Definitely,the first moment I heard the news on the phone, I was pretty happy because I really wanted to see this old friend. But then I had to arrange where to take her around to visit in a short time. I've now got a headache!

Every time she comes back, she wanys to stay for a long time with us, so, we have to find somwwhere for her to live. However, the answer deep in my heart is "I don't want to!" because it will cost me a lot of money and I don't have much money! It's really a dilemma!

Please check for me!!!

Anonymous — Sun, 26 Feb 2006 04:52:29 GMT

My elementary school's classmate-Branda came back from Japan during winter vacation. She had moved to Japan since she graduated from elementary school, it's almost be ten years.
Every time she told me she will back, I got a complicated mind.Definitely,the first moment I heard the news on the phone,I was pretty happy,Because I really wanted to see this old friend.But,following,I had to arrange whichplace to take she around in a short time.It's almost got me headache!
Every time she came back,she would like to stay for a long time with us, so, we have to find place to live with.But the answerdeep in my heart is "I don't want to!" For the reason that it will cost me a lot of money,and I don't have much money! After all, it's really a dilemma!