http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htmPost your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment, or just read for fun.enXMOD (Build: 3614.32638)http://www.englishforums.com/English/ProofreadThis/cwkkv/post.htm#210179Sun, 24 May 2009 03:54:46 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:210179Ruriko0http://www.englishforums.com/English/ProofreadThis/cwkkv/post.htm#210179http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-210179.xmlCan you help me make this longer? I need it to fit on one page and right now it's only half a page. Also if i left out some roles&responsibilities please tell them. Here's the brief description that the roles&responsibilities is based onhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/ProofreadThis/cwkkv/post.htm#210045Tue, 24 Feb 2009 04:54:46 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:210045Clive1http://www.englishforums.com/English/ProofreadThis/cwkkv/post.htm#210045http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-210045.xmlHi, Roles & Responsibilities Who’s responsible for what? Nikki – Overall project management and liaison with client. Script dialog. Direct shoot. Edit video footage. Organise delivery. Bob – Write ? DVDs, design slicks, liaise with DVD printers. Client – Provide expertise and give a demo on key cutting machine, location to be specified. Provide actors & graphics. Mandy – Shoot video. Harry - Recode audio. Lawyer – Design copyright contract for future DVD printing copies. Actors – Peform in key cutting demo. Experts – Provide advice on use of key cutting machine, decide on technical content. (If you're the manager, they all answer to you - even the client, in a sense) Best wishes, Clivehttp://www.englishforums.com/English/ProofreadThis/cwkkv/post.htm#210016Sun, 24 May 2009 03:54:46 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:210016Ruriko2http://www.englishforums.com/English/ProofreadThis/cwkkv/post.htm#210016http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-210016.xmlHere ya go... Rolls & Responsibilities Who’s responsible for what? Client liaison – Nikki Management – Nikki Nikki – Has the role of client liaison. The responsibility of managing the project. Script the dialog. Direct shoot. Edit the video footage. Organise the delivery. Bob – Authoring the DVDs, design the slicks, liaise with the DVD printers. All answerable to Nikki. Client – Provide expertise that will be showing a demo on how to use a key cutting machine. Provide us the location where they will be giving us a demonstration. Provide actors & graphics. Mandy – Will be shooting the video. All answerable to Nikki. Harry - Will be recoding the audio. All answerable to Nikki. Lawyer – Design the copyright contract for future DVD...http://www.englishforums.com/English/ProofreadThis/cwkkv/post.htm#209681Sat, 24 Jan 2009 04:54:46 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:209681Clive3http://www.englishforums.com/English/ProofreadThis/cwkkv/post.htm#209681http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-209681.xmlHi Ruriko, Welcome to the Forum. I think people would prefer you to post the actual text here for them to look at. Best wishes, Clivehttp://www.englishforums.com/English/ProofreadThis/cwkkv/post.htmTue, 24 Feb 2009 04:54:46 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:209410Ruriko4http://www.englishforums.com/English/ProofreadThis/cwkkv/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-209410.xmlCan someone please proofread my rolls&responsibilities document. I need help to make this document longer to fit on one page and If i'm missing any rolls or responsibilites please include them. Here is the brief outline that the document is based on http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/2029/brief6bu.gif