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Re: advantages and disadvantages of watching TV

Anonymous — Fri, 03 Oct 2008 09:03:35 GMT

This is quite a good essay.

Re: advantages and disadvantages of watching TV

Anonymous — Tue, 05 Aug 2008 13:26:06 GMT

hi i like ur writing n also u have good experiencs about the television. i like though other people says u something wrong or something but i like ur writing

Re: advantages and disadvantages of watching TV

Anonymous — Tue, 29 Apr 2008 19:25:35 GMT

it is intersting

keep on writing to progress

Re: advantages and disadvantages of watching TV

Anonymous — Sat, 12 Apr 2008 01:53:45 GMT

I do not understand much more where the topic sentence of each paragraph is.

In your introduction, you mean there are 2 paragraphs: Ad. and disad.

In each p, you must make sure that you have a topic and some more sentences to suport it.

for ex,

TV benefits people in some ways. First of all, tv brings to us an enormous information about the word up to date.....Secondly, it help us relax......Thirdly,..... . Finally,(maybe, you should include a short, general summary of this p)

However, we can not deny some problems tv have influenced on people. Firstly,......... Next, ...... Then.....The last.....

i strongly agree that the effectiveness of an essay will be increased if the author uses the transition words appropriately.

Hope these tiny kinds of ideas can benefit u in some way.

Thanks for your reading.

^^

Anonymous — Fri, 11 Apr 2008 05:28:38 GMT

woah tnx!!

this essay helps a lot :D

Re: advantages and disadvantages of watching TV

Anonymous — Mon, 07 Apr 2008 12:02:11 GMT

ermmm..somewhere back dere...u wrote 24/24..its actually 24/7..u know as n 24 days in 7 days of a week

Re: advantages and disadvantages of watching TV

Anonymous — Fri, 04 Apr 2008 08:12:35 GMT

Hi all,

I thought 365 multiplied by 10 is 3650 and not 3605

Re: advantages and disadvantages of watching TV

Anonymous — Wed, 19 Mar 2008 01:53:59 GMT

last paragraph, spelling of still.

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Re: advantages and disadvantages of watching TV

Anonymous — Sun, 02 Mar 2008 03:24:57 GMT

watching tv keep us on track of what was happening around us but on the other hand, it also greatly influence our views based on what we see.

Re: advantages and disadvantages of watching TV

Anonymous — Sun, 02 Mar 2008 02:37:05 GMT

sorry to say this,..you have the idea friend, but try to study more bout vocabulary and grammar..

Re: advantages and disadvantages of watching TV

Clive — Sat, 01 Mar 2008 05:47:22 GMT

Hi,

Quite.

Nor are there necessarily two leap years in every decade. The year 2000 was not a leap year, for example, so the decade from 1997 to 2006 inclusive only had one leap year.

Best wishes, Clive

Re: advantages and disadvantages of watching TV

julielai — Sat, 01 Mar 2008 05:13:34 GMT

366 days in 2008. :-)

Re: advantages and disadvantages of watching TV

Clive — Thu, 28 Feb 2008 05:25:34 GMT

Hi,

You need to say 'If every day . . ' instead of 'if one day. . '.

Best wishes, Clive

Re: advantages and disadvantages of watching TV

Anonymous — Thu, 28 Feb 2008 04:54:13 GMT

: if one day , one person spends a hour watching TV without gaining any useful information , then in one year he will waste 365 hours and in 10 year is 3605 hours.

your math is wrong in a decade there would be atleast 2 leap years so thats 3607 hours to be precise.

Re: advantages and disadvantages of watching TV

Anonymous — Tue, 26 Feb 2008 17:55:56 GMT

it's very good this esey. I used him for school. Thanks