http://www.englishforums.com/English/EslEssayWritingWorld/Forum9.htmPost your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment or just read for fun.enCSMOD (Build: 3260.39585)http://www.englishforums.com/English/AGoodStory/zzqn/post.htm#26295Thu, 25 Mar 2004 23:08:01 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:26295GuyD0http://www.englishforums.com/English/AGoodStory/zzqn/post.htm#26295http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-26295.xmlAndrew is right. This would not make a good story unless you are a better writer than those who wrote "Snow White and the Seven Dwarfts." <br /> <br />If you use the Google search engine to search for "Mirror, mirrow, on the wall," you will find a number of people who have made tries at using this techique. Beware though if you are a beginner, otherwise, you will put yourself in the land of the mundane. <br /> <br />If you simply wanted to retell the Snow White story, that would be one thing. To see how someone else has done that go to http://teenwriting.about.com/library/submissions/challenges/retoldtales/blretoldtales.htm. If you want to use the play on the title to tell a completely different stroy, as you proposed to the forum, then you are likely to confuse your reader unless you make a very quick transition in your introduction. <br /> <br />You may want to read a few of the article that Google offers you.http://www.englishforums.com/English/AGoodStory/zznc/post.htm#26233Thu, 25 Mar 2004 01:24:16 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:26233andrewdust1http://www.englishforums.com/English/AGoodStory/zznc/post.htm#26233http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-26233.xmlNo.http://www.englishforums.com/English/AGoodStory/zzwg/post.htmTue, 23 Mar 2004 12:04:21 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:26152Guest2http://www.englishforums.com/English/AGoodStory/zzwg/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-26152.xmlThe witch stood facing the mirror and said " Mirror, mirror, on the wall, who's the man I love the most? Do you think this would make an interesting story? Jam.