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Re: Would you help me write this in a better way & grammatically correct?

Mister Micawber — Thu, 05 Oct 2006 05:27:44 GMT

My classmate, Sovan Bun, forwarded to me the information regarding an internship at ABC. I am very much interested in the opportunity and would like to discuss my qualifications further with you.

I have registered with the SPSU office and met the minimum requirements for an internship position with BC. In addition, I took Power Systems Analysis and MicroStation, and I am currently taking Industrial Distribution Systems, Illumination, and the NEC.

Thank you for your time and I look forward to speaking with you in the near future.

Would you help me write this in a better way & grammatically correct?

Nancy19820 — Thu, 05 Oct 2006 01:56:20 GMT

Thank you very much for your help..

My classmate, Sovan Bun, forwarded to me the information regarding an internship at ABC. I am very much interest in the opportunity and would like to discuss with you more about my qualification.

I have registered with the SPSU office and met the minimum requirements for an internship position with BC. In addition, I took Power Systems Analysis, MicroStation, and currently am taking Industrial Distribution Systems, Illumination, and the NEC.

Thank you for your time and I look forward to speaking with you my qualifications.