http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htmPost your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment, or just read for fun.enXMOD (Build: 3614.32638)http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckProofreadEssayBooksBest-Friends/dzgxp/post.htm#991735Wed, 18 Nov 2009 14:30:18 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:991735Anonymous0http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckProofreadEssayBooksBest-Friends/dzgxp/post.htm#991735http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-991735.xmlthank you i have used thishttp://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckProofreadEssayBooksBest-Friends/dzgxp/post.htm#959634Mon, 02 Nov 2009 07:29:20 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:959634Anonymous1http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckProofreadEssayBooksBest-Friends/dzgxp/post.htm#959634http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-959634.xmlit was good but not for my age group,so sorry i was not convinced with your writing.http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckProofreadEssayBooksBest-Friends/dzgxp/post.htm#579343Tue, 24 Mar 2009 01:52:42 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:579343Anonymous2http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckProofreadEssayBooksBest-Friends/dzgxp/post.htm#579343http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-579343.xmlbooks are my best friends. i cant say about that books really good .http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckProofreadEssayBooksBest-Friends/dzgxp/post.htm#278532Tue, 24 Feb 2009 01:52:42 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:278532Maple3http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckProofreadEssayBooksBest-Friends/dzgxp/post.htm#278532http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-278532.xmlHi, Julielai ThankS Now I reword " the knowledge of nature" with "natural science" intervene the pathological ones (wording) . I reword it with "intervene the latter" Hmm, actually, my composition process is like this: I have the outline in my brain in Chinese firstly, then I try to express it in English. So I know there must be something wrong or ambiguous or unnatural in my essay. So thank you very much for checking my essay. Every word of comments counts! Maplehttp://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckProofreadEssayBooksBest-Friends/dzgxp/post.htm#278507Sat, 24 Jan 2009 01:52:42 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:278507julielai4http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckProofreadEssayBooksBest-Friends/dzgxp/post.htm#278507http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-278507.xmlHi, I think your grammar is fine. I suggest you work on your wording. Books, My Best Friends Books are very meaningful to me. They can help me in at least three aspects: letting me know (know a knowledge?) the knowledge of nature, the social cultures, and giving me enjoyment (parallel) . First of all, books can introduce the knowledge of nature to me. (explain, I don't get the knowledge of nature part) I read maths books to know quantities’ properties and relationships (ambiguous) . I read physics books to know the interactions between matter and energy. I read chemistry books to learn the atomic composition, structure, properties, and reactions of matter. I read medicine books to get to know both physiological and...http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckProofreadEssayBooksBest-Friends/dzgxp/post.htmSun, 24 May 2009 00:52:42 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:277115Maple5http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckProofreadEssayBooksBest-Friends/dzgxp/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-277115.xmlThis is my essay writing exercise. Please check it for me. Any comments would be greatly appreciated. Thank you Maple __________________________________________________________________________ Books, My Best Friends Books are very meaningful to me. They can help me in at least three aspects: letting me know the knowledge of nature, the social cultures, and giving me enjoyment. First of all, books can introduce the knowledge of nature to me. I read maths books to know quantities’ properties and relationships. I read physics books to know the interactions between matter and energy. I read chemistry books to learn the atomic composition, structure, properties, and reactions of matter. I read medicine books to get to know...