ESL Essay, Writing Worldhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/EslEssayWritingWorld/Forum9.htmPost your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment or just read for fun.enCSMOD (Build: 3260.39585)Re: Would please help me say this in a better way and grammatically correct?http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldBetterGrammaticallyCorrect/dwxmm/post.htm#294129Fri, 17 Nov 2006 07:17:20 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:294129Widget0http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldBetterGrammaticallyCorrect/dwxmm/post.htm#294129http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-294129.xml<P>I made a few changes - but your original letter is OK.</P> <P>Thank you for replying to my request. <FONT color=#ff0000>I would like to obtain the contact details of the best person to talk to&nbsp;about</FONT><FONT color=#ff0000> establishing</FONT> a AVC restaurant in ABC, DE. The city and citizens are interested in having AVC located here; and&nbsp;<FONT color=#ff0000>we would like</FONT> to know what we need do to <FONT color=#ff0000>make this happen</FONT>. <FONT color=#ff0000>At present, i</FONT>f we want to dine at AVC, we have to drive to DF; which is too far for us.</P><div style="clear:both;"></div>Would please help me say this in a better way and grammatically correct?http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldBetterGrammaticallyCorrect/dwnqv/post.htmThu, 16 Nov 2006 14:47:35 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:293900Nancy198201http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldBetterGrammaticallyCorrect/dwnqv/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-293900.xmlThank you for replying to my request. However, my question was who I should contact for locating a AVC restaurant in ABC, DE. The city and citizens are interested in having AVC located here and wanted to know what we need do to do to have a AVC restaurant in City of ABC, DE. If we want to dine at AVC, we have to drive to DF; which is too far for us.