http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htmPost your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment, or just read for fun.enXMOD (Build: 3616.28671)http://www.englishforums.com/English/HelpShortParagraphPlease/dlchd/post.htm#305571Fri, 27 Feb 2009 01:54:50 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:305571p3t3r0http://www.englishforums.com/English/HelpShortParagraphPlease/dlchd/post.htm#305571http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-305571.xmlWow, this is great! Thanks alot to both of you for the help. Thank you both very much.http://www.englishforums.com/English/HelpShortParagraphPlease/dlchd/post.htm#305538Fri, 27 Feb 2009 01:54:50 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:305538Feebs111http://www.englishforums.com/English/HelpShortParagraphPlease/dlchd/post.htm#305538http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-305538.xmlHowever, it would be unfair to say that the two books cover two totally separate aspects of the revolution ; they do share some common ground . Both books begin with a fair strong introduction on the Revolution that helps to prepare the reader for the contents about to be expressed . A talk about the preconditions of the Revolution follows immediately with the main focus on the role the British played, although a few remarks about Germany, Belgium and France are made here and there. The steam engine is mentioned in both works as the key invention that started the revolution and kept it going. Conditions of the lower classes during the revolution are covered extremely well and there is a special emphasize on the new...http://www.englishforums.com/English/HelpShortParagraphPlease/dlchd/post.htm#305516Mon, 27 Apr 2009 00:54:50 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:305516Na!tSabeS2http://www.englishforums.com/English/HelpShortParagraphPlease/dlchd/post.htm#305516http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-305516.xmlHowever, it would be unfair to say that the two books cover two totally separate aspects of the revolution; they do share/ have some similarities (I'm not sure if "common grounds" is wrong but it sounds odd imho) . Both books begin with a fairly strong introduction on the Revolution that helps to prepare the reader for the contents about to be expressed. A talk about the preconditions of the Revolution follows immediately with the main focus on the role the British played (this doesn't sound that well, maybe: The next part/chapter (?) is concerned/deals with the preconditions of the Revolution and focuses on the role the British played) . Also a few remarks about Germany, Belgium and France are made here and there. The steam engine is...http://www.englishforums.com/English/HelpShortParagraphPlease/dlchd/post.htmMon, 27 Apr 2009 00:54:50 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:305306p3t3r3http://www.englishforums.com/English/HelpShortParagraphPlease/dlchd/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-305306.xmlHi,I would really appreciate it if someone could read over this short paragraph about the Industrial revolution and point out my grammar errors. Thanks alot. However, it would be unfair to say that the two books cover two totally separate aspects of the revolution; they do share some common grounds. Both books begin with a fair strong introduction on the Revolution that helps to prepare the reader for the contents about to be expressed. A talk about the preconditions of the Revolution follows immediately with the main focus on the role the British played. Although a few remarkets about Germany, Belgium and France are made here and there. The steam engine is mentioned in both works as the key invention that started the...