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Re: Check my grammar , and repait my formal letter please

Anonymous — Fri, 25 Apr 2008 05:30:37 GMT

dear mam/sir

i am nicole sert i will shifting my course of bst.i just to take a hrm for raeson is i cant afford to budget my allowance if from montalban to cainta,

Re: Check my grammar , and repait my formal letter please

Anonymous — Sun, 02 Dec 2007 07:18:41 GMT

design a data for hr officer

Re: Check my grammar , and repait my formal letter please

Anonymous — Sun, 02 Dec 2007 07:16:05 GMT

Anonymous wrote:
I muist write formal letter (120 -150 words) with information for goup of student :
- What they should take .
- Where they will stay.
- What they will see.
- Wish them good travel.

Dear Mr John,
I will be keeper of your students group. I'm writing to you to give you some usefull hints.
First of all, you are going to stay at fully furnished , private flat with room for each one of students. They will have 3 meal (breakfast , dinner and supper).
Student must remember about documents - which are needed when crossing the border and have some cash to buy additional drinks and food. Take umbrella and raincoat , beacouse now we have rainy season .
Of course we will do some sightseeing. We come to see Cracov with its Castle , Wielczka (Salt mine)\ . Both are listred on Unesco list.
I can't wait to meet your group and I wish you have a nice, safety trip.
Your's faithfully,

Can some one check and repair it?

Re: Check my grammar , and repait my formal letter please

Feebs11 — Tue, 25 Sep 2007 19:29:22 GMT

Anonymous wrote:
To whom it may concern,

I, Ramon S.Yarza Jr ~~who owned~~, sole owner of R.S.Yarza Trading, hereby authorize Arabelle A. Yarza to encash landbank [is this the name of the bank? in which case: Landbank] check ~~with check~~ no. 1233445. As part of the bank's legal requirements I enclosed two of my IDs. (SSS and Driver's License).

~~Hoping for your kind consideration.~~

~~Sincerly yours~~

Ramon Yarza
[official title]

Is this cheque to be drawn on the company account? Or is is a personal cheque?

If you are authorizing for another person to cash a cheque on the company's behalf, your personal documents do not seem to be of use since they do not refer to the individual nor to the company.

I have had to do a similar exercise on behalf of a company for which I worked, and this kind of authorisation, presented on a company letterhead and signed by the MD, was all that was required.

Re: Check my grammar , and repait my formal letter please

Anonymous — Tue, 25 Sep 2007 16:26:33 GMT

To whom it my concern,

I, Ramon S.Yarza Jr who owned R.S.Yarza Trading hereby authorized Arabelle A. Yarza to incash landbank check with check no. 1233445. As part of the requirements I enclosed two of my ID's. (SSS and Drivers License).

Hoping for your kind consideration.

Sincerly yours

Ramon Yarza

Re: Check my grammar , and repait my formal letter please

Anonymous — Thu, 19 Jul 2007 07:47:44 GMT

what do u think: sending a letter to my ex boss asking for a part time job

Dear Sir

I would like to thank you sincerely for your all support and help during my employment with your organization. I wonât waste your precious time sir Iâll be fast and simple as I have learnt from observing you; Iâm writing to express my interest in working as part time Electrical Engineer in your team.

Now Iâm a shift operation engineer in a gas turbine power station, my responsibilities includes the operation of three gas turbines 33 MW each, besides responding to the sudden equipment failure and malfunction by conducting suitable troubleshooting analysis thus leading to re-entering the equipment in operation shortly.

Also Iâm responsible for distributing tasks among group of technicians and prepare reports for the maintenance department.

My monthly job schedule in the power station is:

Month	Working time
First week	8:00 am till 3:00 pm
Second week	3:00 pm till 10:00 pm
Third week	10:00 pm till 8:00 am
Fourth week	Vacancy

And Iâll be available as following:

Month	Available time	Available hrs
First week	5:00 pm till 1:00 am	8 hrs
Second week	12:00 am till 8:00 am	8 hrs
Third week	10:00 am till 4:00 am	6 hrs
Fourth week	As you wish	8hrs

I know that it wonât be so easy but I âm willing to impress u via my work sir, and to make it easy you accept me as a free trainee for about a month in order to demonstrate my skills and contribute to the company.

Re: Check my grammar , and repait my formal letter please

Anonymous — Sat, 26 May 2007 15:39:57 GMT

Heruin ***,

Student ESL *** Level ***, 2007

20 *** Crescent

Toronto, on tario

***

May 25, 2007

Ms. ***

Teacher ESL *** Level 5 âbâ

Toronto, Ontario

***

Dear Ms. ***;

The purpose of this letter is to let you know, I wonât come to school on Monday ***, 2007 for the following reason: I have an appointment in the Toronto court on Monday *** at 9:00 a.m.

Iâm going to try to be in classroom at 11 or 12 oâclock, Iâm so sorry about that , I can be reached at ***-***-*** or by email at *** should you need additional information.

Sincerely,

*** ***

Re: Check my grammar , and repait my formal letter please

Anonymous — Thu, 22 Mar 2007 15:12:05 GMT

Dear: Reception

Many thanks for the weekend that I and my family had in your hotel.we had wonderful stay and veryconfortable,and we would like to visit your hotel soon.I would like to ask you a favor .I have lost my coat in wardrobe in my room .could you possibly check if it is there,and if it is there can you send me please.And I woulb be pleased if you send me the brochureof your hotel too.I would be most grateful if you do that for me.

Im look forward to hearing from you.

yours sincerely

nora rreda

Re: Check my grammar , and repait my formal letter please

Anonymous — Thu, 15 Mar 2007 13:16:09 GMT

I have pleasure in writing to you on the subject of a possible Cooperation between our institutions in Socrates-Erasmus Programme. We want to improve our international offer and to join partners al Europe for the development of Erasmus Program. Our International Office Staff is very active and often visits European Institutions. Currently several of our international projects under different European Programmes are in progress. Our University has got Diploma Supplement since 1 August 2006.

(Edited to make this fit on the page - please be careful when you copy and paste.)

Re: Check my grammar , and repait my formal letter please

Anonymous — Thu, 15 Mar 2007 12:27:19 GMT

Practice facilities at Faculty of Medicine.

Re: Check my grammar , and repait my formal letter please

Anonymous — Sat, 03 Mar 2007 08:38:54 GMT

Anonymous wrote:
I muist write formal letter (120 -150 words) with information for goup of student :
- What they should take .
- Where they will stay.
- What they will see.
- Wish them good travel.

Dear Mr John,
I will be keeper of your students group. I'm writing to you to give you some usefull hints.
First of all, you are going to stay at fully furnished , private flat with room for each one of students. They will have 3 meal (breakfast , dinner and supper).
Student must remember about documents - which are needed when crossing the border and have some cash to buy additional drinks and food. Take umbrella and raincoat , beacouse now we have rainy season .
Of course we will do some sightseeing. We come to see Cracov with its Castle , Wielczka (Salt mine)\ . Both are listred on Unesco list.
I can't wait to meet your group and I wish you have a nice, safety trip.
Your's faithfully,

Can some one check and repair it?

Re: Check my grammar , and repait my formal letter please

Anonymous — Sat, 03 Mar 2007 08:35:15 GMT

Dear NagymezÅ 26 II/4,

First of all I would like to introduce mysef my name is RÃ©ka Ujj. I am working as a property manager in Home Management Ltd. and I will be your new contact person.

I would like to inform you about your apartment renovation. Unfortunatly I have a bad news for you. In the living room on the wall there is a place

( about: 1mX50cm), where the painting very ugly. Up to now in this very place have been the sofa.

Already I requested for proposal. It means necessary first priming after painting. It will cost arround 40 000/ Huf.

Your Expense Buffer at this moment â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦ /Huf.

I would be most grateful if you could reply as soon as possible so that this matter can be resolved.

If you have any question please do not hesitate to contact me!

Sincerely,

RÃ©ka Ujj

Re: Check my grammar , and repait my formal letter please

Feebs11 — Sun, 31 Dec 2006 23:55:38 GMT

Anonymous wrote:
I muist write formal letter (120 -150 words) with information for goup of student :
- What they should take .
- Where they will stay.
- What they will see.
- Wish them good travel.

Dear Mr John,
I will be ~~keeper~~ [wrong word - leader/supervisor/liaison officer] of your students group [student group OR students's group]. I'm writing to you to give you some useful hints.
First of all, you are going to stay at a fully furnished [delete comma - not required here] private flat with room for each one of students [Unclear - a room for each student OR room for all the students?]. They will have 3 [spell out numerals below 10 - three] meals (breakfast, dinner and supper).
Student must remember ~~about~~ [their] documents, which are needed when crossing the border, and have some cash to buy additional drinks and food. ~~Take~~ [Bring] umbrellas and raincoats ~~, beacouse now we have rainy season~~ as this is the rainy season.
~~Of course~~ [Also/in addition} we will do some sightseeing~~. We come to see~~ in Cracov with its Castle and the Wieliczka Salt Mine. Both are listed on the UnescoWorld Heritage List
I can't wait to meet your group and I ~~wish~~ hope you have a nice, ~~safety~~ safe trip ["journey" would be better here].
Your's [NO APOSTROPHE> Yours] faithfully,

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Check my grammar , and repait my formal letter please

Anonymous — Sun, 31 Dec 2006 12:55:00 GMT

I muist write formal letter (120 -150 words) with information for goup of student :
- What they should take .
- Where they will stay.
- What they will see.
- Wish them good travel.

Dear Mr John,
I will be keeper of your students group. I'm writing to you to give you some usefull hints.
First of all, you are going to stay at fully furnished , private flat with room for each one of students. They will have 3 meal (breakfast , dinner and supper).
Student must remember about documents - which are needed when crossing the border and have some cash to buy additional drinks and food. Take umbrella and raincoat , beacouse now we have rainy season .
Of course we will do some sightseeing. We come to see Cracov with its Castle , Wielczka (Salt mine)\ . Both are listred on Unesco list.
I can't wait to meet your group and I wish you have a nice, safety trip.
Your's faithfully,

Can some one check and repair it?