http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htmPost your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment, or just read for fun.enXMOD (Build: 3607.32596)http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldCheckEssay/vvbcl/post.htm#357027Sun, 22 Feb 2009 20:28:21 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:357027chiara0http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldCheckEssay/vvbcl/post.htm#357027http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-357027.xmlHello St1ff, thank you for your answer. Chiarahttp://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldCheckEssay/vvbcl/post.htm#356989Fri, 22 May 2009 19:28:21 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:356989St1ff1http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldCheckEssay/vvbcl/post.htm#356989http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-356989.xmlwell for the first part I'd say that you have to change the order to keep the logic, but to connect both parts you should keep your "since" instead of my "as"http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldCheckEssay/vvbcl/post.htm#354861Sun, 22 Mar 2009 20:28:21 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:354861chiara2http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldCheckEssay/vvbcl/post.htm#354861http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-354861.xmlHello, thank you for correcting my essay and for your nice words. Just a question: I don't understand very well the following corrections. I've the impression that the first one doesn't sound ver much linked to the sentence before; the second one is probably just a different writing style we have: could it be? It's the most common dream to travel back in time, unfortunately nobody has made up invented a time machine to travel back to the past yet , but this is still one the most common dream. Since As I find think that creativity is one of the nicest and most important aspect s of human life, if I could travel to the past I would choose a period remarkable for its important artistic production , if I could...http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldCheckEssay/vvbcl/post.htm#354731Sun, 22 Feb 2009 20:28:21 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:354731St1ff3http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldCheckEssay/vvbcl/post.htm#354731http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-354731.xmlChiara wrote: Hello, I tried to write something else. I would be very grateful if somebody could check it, and give me any kind of suggestion to improve my writing. Thanks a lot, Chiara If you were able to travel back to any place and time in history, where and when would you choose? Describe what you might experience and tell us why you would choose this particular place and time. As human beings we can live in the present and can plan our future in which we hopefully can hopefully make see our dreams come true. But It's the most common dream to travel back in time, unfortunately nobody has made up invented a time machine to travel back to the past yet , but this is still one the most common dream . ...http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldCheckEssay/vvbcl/post.htmWed, 22 Apr 2009 19:28:21 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:354070chiara4http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldCheckEssay/vvbcl/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-354070.xmlHello, I tried to write something else. I would be very grateful if somebody could check it, and give me any kind of suggestion to improve my writing. Thanks a lot, Chiara If you were able to travel back to any place and time in history, where and when would you choose? Describe what you might experience and tell us why you would choose this particular place and time. As human beings we can live in the present and plan our future in which we hopefully can see our dreams come true. But unfortunately nobody has made up a machine to travel to the past yet, but this is still one the most common dream. Since I find creativity one of the nicest and most important aspect of human life, if I could travel to the...