http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htmPost your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment, or just read for fun.enXMOD (Build: 3615.39139)http://www.englishforums.com/English/ProofreadMySpeech/vvzqh/post.htm#356411Sun, 25 Jan 2009 13:58:56 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:356411julielai0http://www.englishforums.com/English/ProofreadMySpeech/vvzqh/post.htm#356411http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-356411.xmlTook a look at a couple of paragraphs. I suggest you rewrite some of your sentences so they don't start with an ambiguous "it". e.g. It will not have a title bar but it will have a exit bottom on the interface. How about: No title bar will be available on xyz, but an "exit" buttom will be provided on the interface. (something like that) Ruriko wrote: Hi can anyone proofread my speech? Background/Concept MMORPG stands for massive multiplayer online role-playing game (you need a pause here) it is a type of game genre. MMORPGs are online role-playing multiplayer games which allow thousands of gamers to play in the game's evolving virtual world at the same time via the Internet. My objective to (wrong prep) this project is to...http://www.englishforums.com/English/ProofreadMySpeech/vvzqh/post.htmWed, 25 Mar 2009 13:58:56 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:355460Ruriko1http://www.englishforums.com/English/ProofreadMySpeech/vvzqh/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-355460.xmlHi can anyone proofread my speech? Background/Concept My project is going to be on Trickster Online. Trickster Online is a MMORPG. MMORPG stands for massive multiplayer online role-playing game it is a type of game genre. MMORPGs are online role-playing multiplayer games which allow thousands of gamers to play in the game's evolving virtual world at the same time via the Internet. My objective to this project is to create a informative CD-Rom that should allow new users to have some indepth experience of the game "Trickster Online". Content (including multimedia elements) It will have about 14 pages or more. Almost every page will have images but I will try not to flood it with pictures. It contains 2 interfaces. One is the home page...