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Feebs11 — Wed, 30 May 2007 00:57:50 GMT

Ghai_prince13 wrote:
14.1 topic:::: 14.1. ~~To you there have arrived friends from other city~~ Some friends have come to stay with you. Simultaneously your close friend invites you to go together with it on rest for some days:

1) Explain to it [You do not use "it" to refer to a person] ~~a situation~~ why you cannot accept its invitation;

2) Will invite it to spend this time together with you and your friends;

3) Tell to it about those places which you gather to show the friends in your native city.

My cousins are coming from Russia~~. They will~~ to stay with us. ~~But~~ my invited ask me [You asked me/had invited me]to go to the taj mahal [proper name] and to do some shopping, but I cannot accept this invitation. We {you should say who is going] will go around delhi [proper name]. We will go to some interest places. One of the most beautiful ancient buildings is the red fort [proper name] .itâs beautifully built with red marbles. it was made by the mughals [proper name] who ruled India. In Delhi you also find a number of temples, the most beautiful of which is the lotus temple [proper name]which is of the shape of a lotus. Also, there are lots museum which tells you about ~~the~~ ancient India like the national museum [proper name]. There are also many universities and educational institution in Delhi. I think that it will be cool if you will joined us. And I think my cousin love it and would like to here again and again
Proper names must be spelled with capital letters. Always put one space after punctuation. Always capitalize "I"

7.3 topic ::::: Write the compressed instruction on the rules of safe behavior in the street and in public places

Al of us know the rules of traffic lights: red for stop, green for go, ~~yellow to not forget ready~~ amber for get ready.You should always cross the road on a zebra crossing or at a nearby red light once other people have already started crossing the street. You look both ways before crossing. Babies should ride in rear~~ing~~-facing child seats until they are at least one year old. Wear your safety belt. ~~Low~~ Slow down when you follow the speed limit. Obey all the traffic rules and regulations for your safety

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Ghai_prince13 — Mon, 28 May 2007 20:04:29 GMT

14.1 topic:::: 14.1. To you there have arrived friends from other city. Simultaneously your close friend invites you to go together with it on rest for some days:

1) Explain to it a situation why you cannot accept its invitation;

2) Will invite it to spend this time together with you and your friends;

3) Tell to it about those places which you gather

To show the friends in your native city.

My cousins are coming from Russia. They will stay with us. But my invited ask me to go to taj mahal and to do some shopping .i cannot accept this invitation. We will go around delhi.we will go to some interest places. One of the most beautiful ancient buildings is the red fort.itâs beautifully built with red marbles. it was made by the mughals who ruled India. In Delhi you also find a number of temples, the most beautiful of which is the lotus temple which is of the shape of a lotus. Also, there are lots museum which tells you about the ancient India like national museum. There are also many universities and educational institution in Delhi. i think that will be cool if you will joined us. And I think my cousin love it and would like to here again and again

7.3 topic ::::: Write the compressed instruction on rules of safe behavior

In the street and in public places

Al of us know the rules of traffics red for stop, green for go, yellow to not forget ready .You should always cross the road on zebra or nearby red light, and other people have already started crossing the street. You look both ways before crossing. Babies should ride in rearing facing child seat until they are at least one year. Wear your safety belt. Low down when you follow the speed limit. Obey all the traffic rules and regulation for your safety

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