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<?xml-stylesheet type="text/xsl" href="http://www.englishforums.com/utility/FeedStylesheets/rss.xsl" media="screen"?><rss version="2.0" xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/" xmlns:slash="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/slash/" xmlns:wfw="http://wellformedweb.org/CommentAPI/"><channel><title>Essay, Report &amp; Composition Writing</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htm</link><description>Post your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment, or just read for fun.</description><dc:language>en</dc:language><generator>XMOD (Build: 3616.28671)</generator><item><title>Re: grammar n wording correction...</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/GrammarNWordingCorrection/vwgdj/post.htm#375191</link><pubDate>Mon, 25 May 2009 18:10:07 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:375191</guid><dc:creator>Hampeh</dc:creator><slash:comments>0</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/GrammarNWordingCorrection/vwgdj/post.htm#375191</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-375191.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>thank you for your reply. sori but i don't get it. do u mean post only things i need to check? but i hope u can check everything...even in my text-speak. if there is any mistake there, so i won't repeat it again in the future</description></item><item><title>Re: grammar n wording correction...</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/GrammarNWordingCorrection/vwgdj/post.htm#375188</link><pubDate>Wed, 25 Mar 2009 19:10:07 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:375188</guid><dc:creator>Grammar Geek</dc:creator><slash:comments>1</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/GrammarNWordingCorrection/vwgdj/post.htm#375188</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-375188.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Hampeh, 
 Why don't you rewrite it using real words and not text-speak. That may address some of your grammar problems.</description></item><item><title>grammar n wording correction...</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/GrammarNWordingCorrection/vwgdj/post.htm</link><pubDate>Sat, 25 Apr 2009 18:10:07 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:375182</guid><dc:creator>Hampeh</dc:creator><slash:comments>2</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/GrammarNWordingCorrection/vwgdj/post.htm</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-375182.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>i want to email to someone...my old friends. is it
correct or not my wording n grammar as below. i'm really appreciate if
any of u be able to rectify it.. thanks. anything else i need to
add...coz this is 1st time i'll sent an email to her 
   hi, 
 
 I got this mail address from your blog after google for
certain information. N I just wanna say keep up the good work for it. 


 Seems like I know u somewhere before. Since u r say that u r
working in ibm. Hv u ever stay in california
before this 
regards, ur old fren</description></item></channel></rss>