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Re: Sentences

Fizzi — Tue, 03 Jul 2007 00:04:33 GMT

Thanks Clive

Regards,

Fizzi

Re: Sentences

Clive — Mon, 02 Jul 2007 15:03:27 GMT

Hi again,

Do you think it is ok if I add "continue" in the sentence. Yes, that's OK.

"My wife's application for a study leave extension until 15th. August 2007 has been approved by the university. As I wish to continue to accompany her while she is completing her studies, I would like to apply for an extension of unpaid leave until the same date."

Best wishes, Clive

Re: Sentences

Fizzi — Mon, 02 Jul 2007 07:54:14 GMT

Hi Clive,

Thanks for your suggestions.

Do you think it is ok if I add "continue" in the sentence.

"My wife's application for a study leave extension until 15th. August 2007 has been approved by the university. As I wish to continue accompany her while she is completing her studies, I would like to apply for an extension of unpaid leave until the same date"

Regards,

Fizzi

Re: Sentences

Clive — Mon, 02 Jul 2007 00:53:57 GMT

Hi Fizzi,

1. My wife's application for a study leave extension until 15th. August 2007 has been approved by the university. As I wish to accompany her while she is completing her studies, I would like to apply for an extension of unpaid leave until the same date.

2. My kid has blood in his urine.

Best wishes, Clive

Sentences

Fizzi — Mon, 02 Jul 2007 00:38:59 GMT

Hi all,

Would somebody please help me with the English?

1. My wife's application for extension of study leave has been approved by the university to 15. August. 2007. As I am accompanying my wife while she is completing her study, I would like to apply for an extension of unpaid leave until the same date.

2. My kid is bleeding when he does the wee.

Regards,

Fizzi