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Re: could you help me with my cv ???????

Grammar Geek — Fri, 20 Jul 2007 23:17:08 GMT

The formatting is VERY hard to overcome in this. Decide which tense - past - and use it consistencly. Check ALL of your spelling!! Capitalize proper nouns.

(for future reference, don't post your personal contact information in the forum)

Born: 16/10/78 At least in the US, we do not put our birthdays on resumes. I believe it's the same in the UK. Ask a Brit.

Languages: English, Spanish Have your titles start with capital letters, and make sure languages also start with capitals

Status: European residence European should also be capitalized. Is this important?

Computers skills: Microsoft Office products, including X, Y, Z, and database programs (list them - but not Access - that's part of Office.)

Objective: A position in which I can use my financial and  business skills to further the goals of the company

Education

 
2002 â 2003                ESIC business school, Madrid (Spain), Masters in Finance

1996 â 2000                Northern University (Colombia), BA in Business Administration (graduated with honors)

Employment

 
2002 â 2006       Abba Advertisement & Communnication, Madrid, SSpain

                      Administrative and financial assistant

Processed and managed administrative/financial information for the director to manage comapny's activity.

Provided administrative support to develop a strong team and clear communications.

Addressed all administrative and financial issues.

Selected accomplisments: These are duties, not accomplishments

Neogtiated with suppliers to reduce prices for projects/products and improve profitability.

Processed and verified all accounts payable for *** supplier

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Managed insurance policies
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Developed strategic solutions that strengthen investment goals.  What? Leave this out unless you can quantify.

Served as liaison to other departments for sales, costs, and profitability for campaigns/services offering for the company.

Controlled and verified the liquidation and payments of annual bonus (rappel) from suppliers.

2000 â 2002               Chamber of Commerce and Industry, Barranquilla, Colombia

                                Assistant of development and competitiveness department

I'm sorry, but the formatting is too much for me to work with.

Try pasting your resume into a program like Notebook, cleaning it up, and reposting it here.

Advicing companies for their competitive development on the market, based on strengths.

Selected accomplisments:

<!--[if !supportLists]-->Â·    <!--[endif]-->Analysing the competitive condition of companies.

<!--[if !supportLists]-->Â·    <!--[endif]-->Researching on the behavior of markets in order to find out different opportunities of insertion for companies.

<!--[if !supportLists]-->Â·    <!--[endif]-->Setting up work strategies for company clusters in order to improve their establisment and succed in the market.

<!--[if !supportLists]-->Â·    <!--[endif]-->Writing articles and publications based in economic researches and analisys in order to help the performance of companies in the market.

  1999 â 2000                 Water of Barcelona (Triple A, AGBAR), Barranquilla (Colombia)

                                    Intership finance department

<!--[if !supportLists]-->Â·    <!--[endif]-->Supporting different areas of the department.

<!--[if !supportLists]-->Â·    <!--[endif]-->Reporting to the accounting director about investments of the company.

<!--[if !supportLists]-->Â·    <!--[endif]-->Codifing different costs projects for its assignment according to departments.

           Publications

              &  Honors

 
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2000 â 2001               The strategic sectors of the manufacturing industry of North Colombia

                                  and their possibilities of insertion in the Great Caribbean. Edition 201
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1996 â 2000               Graduated with honors, ba business administration, northern university

Re: could you help me with my cv ???????

julielai — Fri, 20 Jul 2007 23:03:56 GMT

You need to fix your punctuation and capitalization problems.

e.g.

2002 â 2003 ESIC business school, Madrid (Spain) (capitalization and punctuation)

Masters in finance (It's B.A. and Master's degree "in"...)

1996 â 2000 Northern University, (Colombia) (Why in ())

BA business administration, graduated with honors

could you help me with my cv ???????

Frijyn — Fri, 20 Jul 2007 22:37:46 GMT

hello guys !! im in london, and i need my cv ready for tomorrow because i've got an appointmet. Do you mind to help me???? its very important for me.......thanks !!!!!!!

juan diaz

25 pratt street

london, NW1 0BC

077 66 037 332

juandiaz345@hotmail.com

born: 16/10/78

languages: english, spanish

status: european residence

computers skills: office - data bases

Goal: I would like to work in a place where I could develop my financial and business skills

Education

2002 â 2003 ESIC business school, Madrid (Spain)

Masters in finance

1996 â 2000 Northern University, (Colombia)

BA business administration, graduated with honors

Employment

2002 â 2006 Abba advertisement & communnication, Madrid (Spain)

Administrative and financial assistant

Process and manage administrative/financial information for the director in order to manage the activity of the company. Offer an administrative support developing an strong team work with clear communication, dealing with all administrative and financial issues.

Selected accomplisments:

Â· Dealing with suppliers in order to obtein competitives prices for projects/products.

Â· Checking and doing payments of invoices from differents suppliers.

Â· Managing insurance policies of the sales. (condition, unpaid, risk of credit)

Â· Developing strategie solutions that strengthen investment goals.

Â· Dealing with different departments about sales, costs, and profits of campaigns/services offering for the company.

Â· Controling and checking the liquidation and payments of annual bonus (rappel) given by suppliers.

2000 â 2002 Chamber of Commerce and Industry, Barranquilla (Colombia)

Assistant of development and competitiveness department

Advicing companies for their competitive development on the market, based on strengths.

Selected accomplisments:

Â· Analysing the competitive condition of companies.

Â· Researching on the behavior of markets in order to find out different opportunities of insertion for companies.

Â· Setting up work strategies for company clusters in order to improve their establisment and succed in the market.

Â· Writing articles and publications based in economic researches and analisys in order to help the performance of companies in the market.

1999 â 2000 Water of Barcelona (Triple A, AGBAR), Barranquilla (Colombia)

Intership finance department

Â· Supporting different areas of the department.

Â· Reporting to the accounting director about investments of the company.

Â· Codifing different costs projects for its assignment according to departments.

Publications

& Honors

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2000 â 2001 The strategic sectors of the manufacturing industry of North Colombia

and their possibilities of insertion in the Great Caribbean. Edition 201

1996 â 2000 Graduated with honors, ba business administration, northern university