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Re: edit my essay

Education — Mon, 27 Aug 2007 02:59:28 GMT

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Re: edit my essay

Grammar Geek — Mon, 27 Aug 2007 01:03:29 GMT

Education wrote:

2- Ways to get good grades.

None of us likes to get low grades in school, but us we know every diligent has portion. We alweyas reward of our action. There are several keys and ways to get good grades.

First of all, a student must have characteristics of discipline in order to get good grades. For example, a student should come on time in class, if not early. They should attend all lectures because by cutting classes a student won't be able to understand several subjects well. As well, a student must cover all the materials along time before the exam and avoid staying awake at the night of the exam. Also, a student must pay all his/her attention to the lecture when he /she is explain and a student ought to write an impotents notes. Moreover, donât be sham to ask teacher any question that is unclear for you. By shyness a person will never learn. In addition, one of the traits a student needs to get a good grade is to be responsible. He/she should never delay their tasks such as writing homework and read ahead textbook. Also, students must know how to budget their time efficiently. Above of all, students need to be sedulous and hard worker to get good grade. They should always do things without being told: they donât wait for assignments or a teacher before they prepare in textbook. Also, students must concentrate on their studies and donât let any thing else interrupt them during study time. Students have to put for themselves a schedule of studying and then follow it as much as possible. A students needs to do more practices to make sure that he/she is familiar with subjects. Most of us find doing exercises is boring, but it is the best way to know how much we learned or progressed.

As I said, getting good grades requires a lot of efforts and perseveres. Those who sow flowers or roses will not earn thorns.

i am waiting for your responses and ides

The blue highlights awkward, unintelligible, or simply the wrong word choice. The grey highlights missppelled words or typos. Use switch of plural to singular. You should break your essay into paragraphs. Just out of curiousity, how should a student do assignments before they are assigned? Your final figure of speech is not one I've ever heard before - is it a literal translation from one in your own language.

P.S. - It's nice to hear "please."

edit my essay

Education — Sun, 26 Aug 2007 19:53:20 GMT

2- Ways to get good grades.

None of us likes to get low grades in school, but us we know every diligent has portion. We alweyas reward of our action. There are several keys and ways to get good grades.

First of all, a student must have characteristics of discipline in order to get good grades. For example, a student should come on time in class, if not early. They should attend all lectures because by cutting classes a student won't be able to understand several subjects well. As well, a student must cover all the materials along time before the exam and avoid staying awake at the night of the exam. Also, a student must pay all his/her attention to the lecture when he /she is explain and a student ought to write an impotents notes. Moreover, donât be sham to ask teacher any question that is unclear for you. By shyness a person will never learn. In addition, one of the traits a student needs to get a good grade is to be responsible. He/she should never delay their tasks such as writing homework and read ahead textbook. Also, students must know how to budget their time efficiently. Above of all, students need to be sedulous and hard worker to get good grade. They should always do things without being told: they donât wait for assignments or a teacher before they prepare in textbook. Also, students must concentrate on their studies and donât let any thing else interrupt them during study time. Students have to put for themselves a schedule of studying and then follow it as much as possible. A students needs to do more practices to make sure that he/she is familiar with subjects. Most of us find doing exercises is boring, but it is the best way to know how much we learned or progressed.

As I said, getting good grades requires a lot of efforts and perseveres. Those who sow flowers or roses will not earn thorns.

i am waiting for your responses and ides