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<rss version="2.0" xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/" xmlns:slash="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/slash/" xmlns:wfw="http://wellformedweb.org/CommentAPI/"><channel><title>ESL Essay, Writing World</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/EslEssayWritingWorld/Forum9.htm</link><description>Post your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment or just read for fun.</description><dc:language>en</dc:language><generator>CSMOD (Build: 3260.39585)</generator><item><title>Need Help. Thank you.</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/NeedHelpThankYou/wkww/post.htm#42338</link><pubDate>Sun, 15 Aug 2004 14:15:05 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:42338</guid><dc:creator>Mister Micawber</dc:creator><slash:comments>0</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/NeedHelpThankYou/wkww/post.htm#42338</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-42338.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Easy!  Just write something and post it here.  Someone will help you correct it.  For example:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;"Hello, everyone.  My name is Ann.  I've just graduated from university and am hunting for a job now.  Someone said that my oral English is quite good, but my written English is vefy poor.  I dont know how to improve my written English-- by reading books and newspapers?  I hope that someone here can give me some advice!  Thank you very much!"&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Rule 1:  Be thrifty with exclamation marks;  one is always sufficient.&lt;br /&gt;Rule 2:  Do not write as you speak.  Be more careful in grammar and sentence structure, and more formal in vocabulary.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;</description></item><item><title>Need Help!!!Thanx!!!!!</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/NeedHelpThanx/whwh/post.htm</link><pubDate>Tue, 10 Aug 2004 04:38:53 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:41470</guid><dc:creator>Guest</dc:creator><slash:comments>1</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/NeedHelpThanx/whwh/post.htm</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-41470.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Hello,Everyone,My name is Ann&lt;br /&gt;iv graduated from the University and hunting job now&lt;br /&gt;Some one said my oral English is quite good,but my wirtten English is so poor~~i dont know how to improve my written English!? Reading books,newspapers?&lt;br /&gt;Hope anyone here can give me some advice!!!!!!!!!!&lt;br /&gt;Thank You sooooooooooooo much!!!!!!!!</description></item></channel></rss>