http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htmPost your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment, or just read for fun.enXMOD (Build: 3607.32596)http://www.englishforums.com/English/IWroteEssayCheckThank/vqqdc/post.htm#564922Fri, 23 Jan 2009 09:41:26 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:564922Anonymous0http://www.englishforums.com/English/IWroteEssayCheckThank/vqqdc/post.htm#564922http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-564922.xmlHi. You should improve on your vocabulary and grammar. For example, it's "affected" not "effect". If you want to attempt this kind of one-word essay, you should plan on what you want to write first. Best is to do a mindmap. Brainstorm everything related to stress/pressure and start a narrative story from it. It would be much more interesting and easy to attempt. (: But overall it's quite a good job done. Well done! :Dhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/IWroteEssayCheckThank/vqqdc/post.htm#417455Thu, 23 Apr 2009 08:41:26 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:417455nona the brit1http://www.englishforums.com/English/IWroteEssayCheckThank/vqqdc/post.htm#417455http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-417455.xmlOnly one paragraph relates to peer pressure; the one discussing teenagers being encouraged to smoke and drink by their friends. The rest of the essay isn't about peer pressure.http://www.englishforums.com/English/IWroteEssayCheckThank/vqqdc/post.htm#417383Sat, 23 May 2009 08:41:26 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:417383julielai2http://www.englishforums.com/English/IWroteEssayCheckThank/vqqdc/post.htm#417383http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-417383.xmlPeer pressure and stress aren't the same thing. Here is a definition from Wikipedia: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Peer_pressurehttp://www.englishforums.com/English/IWroteEssayCheckThank/vqqdc/post.htmThu, 23 Apr 2009 08:41:26 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:417369Anonymous3http://www.englishforums.com/English/IWroteEssayCheckThank/vqqdc/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-417369.xmlI was very happy when I found this web site. I been having grammer, and essay problems for many years(4years). First year of my college I had to take developmental writing course, I was okay with it because I knew how bad I was. When I retook the test, I failed it again, and I haven't been to school since then. I really want to go back to school, but before going back, I would like to write many essays on this website to write more effectivly. Please help this poor guy!! Please when you fix my grammers, or essay please explain in detail if you can so I could fix it. If you have any other advises on me please tell me!! Thank You so much!! I wrote an essay about stresses or peer pressure. Peer Pressures – peer pressures can be...