http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htmPost your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment, or just read for fun.enXMOD (Build: 3615.39139)http://www.englishforums.com/English/SuggestionsImproveStrengthenThesis-Statement/zrxnj/post.htm#422294Wed, 25 Mar 2009 02:33:49 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:422294Grammar Geek0http://www.englishforums.com/English/SuggestionsImproveStrengthenThesis-Statement/zrxnj/post.htm#422294http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-422294.xmlDon't "say" he's morally ambiguous -- just show HOW he's morally ambiguous. The duke feels a need to prove his power, which colors his interaction with the other characters. It's hard to discern his true motives.http://www.englishforums.com/English/SuggestionsImproveStrengthenThesis-Statement/zrxnj/post.htmSat, 25 Apr 2009 01:33:49 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:421881Kkobligacion1http://www.englishforums.com/English/SuggestionsImproveStrengthenThesis-Statement/zrxnj/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-421881.xmlHi! This is the first time I posted in here, but I've checking this site since last year via recommendation from my friend. We're currently writing an essay using this prompt: "Morally ambiguous characters - characters whose behavior discourages readers from identifying them as purely evil or purely good - are at the heart of many works of literature. Choose a novel or play in which you explain how the character can be viewed as morally ambiguous and why his/her moral ambiguity is significant to the work as a whole ." And here is my thesis statement (I hid the title/names of the characters for personal reasons, I hope you don't mind): ...In the play , by , the shows his ambiguity through his thoughts and interaction with...