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Review, comment or just read for fun.enCSMOD (Build: 3260.39585)http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldAnyoneCheckEssayConfident-About/zcjxg/post.htm#430276Sat, 13 Oct 2007 03:05:54 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:430276Xuteng0http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldAnyoneCheckEssayConfident-About/zcjxg/post.htm#430276http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-430276.xml<P>Thank you so much!</P> <P>You are kind and helpful!</P><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldAnyoneCheckEssayConfident-About/zcjxz/post.htm#430275Sat, 13 Oct 2007 03:04:29 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:430275Xuteng1http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldAnyoneCheckEssayConfident-About/zcjxz/post.htm#430275http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-430275.xml<P>Thank you so much for checking my essay!</P> <P>You are patient and helpful!</P><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldAnyoneCheckEssayConfident-About/zcjjj/post.htm#430194Fri, 12 Oct 2007 19:12:09 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:430194Feebs112http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldAnyoneCheckEssayConfident-About/zcjjj/post.htm#430194http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-430194.xml<BLOCKQUOTE><table width="85%"><tr><td class="txt4"><img src="/Themes/default/images/icon-quote.gif">&nbsp;<strong>Xuteng wrote:</strong></td></tr><tr><td class="quoteTable"><table width="100%"><tr><td width="100%" valign="top" class="txt4"><p>Even if I learnt english for many years,my english is still not well enough.So I try to write.But when I want someone english native to tell me where I'm wrong,I got confused.Now I found this forum,I wish there could someone kind-hearted help me point out the mistakes I got in the essay.This will make a great effort in my english learning.Many thanks!</p> <p>And this is my essay:</p> <h2 class="posttitle">[Try to write in English]</h2> <div class="entry"> <p>Treating <font color="#ff0000"><b>E</b><b></b></font>nglish as my second language, I find it difficult to understand some words or sentences.This semester, I got no<font color="#ff0000"><b> E</b><b></b></font>nglish classes except one in the tourism college.When I study with those <font color="#ff0000"><b>E</b><b></b></font>nglish major students, I feel a little nervous, not because I’m a foreigner, but <font color="#ff0000"><b>because </b></font>my <font color="#ff0000"><b>E</b><b></b></font>nglish ability is far behind<b><font color="#ff0000"> theirs</font></b><strike> them</strike>.Also I know <strike>the only</strike> <b><font color="#ff0000">that only </font></b>studying in class is not enough. I should do more <strike>jobs </strike>about <font color="#ff0000"><b>writing</b><b></b></font>, speaking and listening.</p> <p><strike>So even </strike><b><font color="#ff0000">M</font></b>y <font color="#ff0000"><b>E</b><b></b></font>nglish is not <font color="#ff0000"><b>good</b><b></b></font> <strike>enough</strike>,but I’ll try my best to express what I think and how I feel in <font color="#ff0000"><b>E</b><b></b></font>nglish.</p><p>The best way of studying a language is trying to think in that language.</p><p><br></p><p>Please tell my where I am wrong in my essay. Many thanks!</p></div></td></tr></table></td></tr></table></BLOCKQUOTE><br><br>***&nbsp; English is <i>always </i>spelt with a capital letter.<br><br>Always put one space after any punctuation.<br><br>In its content, it is not at all bad. Keep practicing!<br><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldAnyoneCheckEssayConfident-About/zcjwj/post.htmFri, 12 Oct 2007 17:29:05 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:430177Xuteng3http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldAnyoneCheckEssayConfident-About/zcjwj/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-430177.xml<P>Even if I learnt english for many years,my english is still not well enough.So I try to write.But when I want someone english native to tell me where I'm wrong,I got confused.Now I found this forum,I wish there could someone kind-hearted help me point out the mistakes I got in the essay.This will make a great effort in my english learning.Many thanks!</P> <P>And this is my essay:</P> <H2 class=posttitle>[Try to write in English]</H2> <DIV class=entry> <P>Treating english as my second language, I find it difficult to understand some words or sentences.This semester,I got no english classes except one in the tourism college.When I study with those english major students, I feel a little nervous, not because I’m a foreigner, but my english ability is far behind them.Also I know the only studying in class is not enough. I should do more jobs about writting,speaking and listening.</P> <P>So even my english is not well enough,but I’ll try my best to express what I think and how I feel in english.<BR>The best way of studying a language is trying to think in that language.<BR>Please tell my where I am wrong in my essay. Many thanks!</P></DIV><div style="clear:both;"></div>