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Re: My Essay I NEED HELP

Feebs11 — Tue, 30 Oct 2007 01:34:19 GMT

Empham0us wrote:

Graphic Designer is something that I love doing from logos, presentations to posters. They all have given me the drive to pursue a career in graphic design. Studying graphic design and earing my degrees at Savannah College of Art and Design will allow me to explore new areas and discover career opportunities to become successful. Just like other art careers, being a designer its required that you have the talent and direction as well as determination and commitment. I feel that there's more to a graphic designer than just skill. You need to be able to focus on your goals and be able to put fourth the time and effort to reach them along with deadlines.

Many skills are needed in order to be a graphic designer. Being organized will help you with time management. Knowing and managing my time or setting deadlines has improved my judgment and decision making. Active learning helps with understanding information both current and future. My critical thinking skills has helped me to identify some of my strengths and weaknesses of many different solutions or conclusions. Its important that I have a visual sensibility to understand what works and what doesn't work. I feel that as a graphic designer you should try doing things that will help you improve your taste and style. Deadlines are extremely tight and puts pressure on the designer, but with the help an a little experience working hard and studying will give me a fair chance of success.

I have to be able to complete task in a timely manner. Creating design concepts and knowing how to key information into computer equipment. Using computer software and understanding how things work Drawing and printing charts, graphs, illustrations, and other artwork using the computer. I do have knowledge of circuit boards, processors, chips, electronic equipment, and computer hardware and software.

My philosophy as a student will still remain the same and that is to stay on top of what you do. Face your problems to make a great outcome regardless if its an illustration or the click of a mouse. I know that there are no limitations to the way I can express myself through art. As a student I'm willing to approach and execute the design of visual communications creatively and responsibly. looking forward to the study of fine arts, craftsmanship, and design theory along with other design experiences. I will show an exceptionally strong commitment to my work. Also I want to learn the fundamentals that every designer must know to be a success. From drawing to typography to more advanced and complex classes. I won't stop experimenting with the millions of ideas that I have stored in my head. I like to sit and brainstorm with others weather its in a classroom setting or outside of them classroom.

Errors are highlighted in red.

You have several incomplete sentences. Some may be the result of incorrect punctuation. You need to look into this.

Re: My Essay I NEED HELP

Empham0us — Mon, 29 Oct 2007 15:51:45 GMT

Graphic Designer is something that I love doing from logos, presentations to posters. They all have given me the drive to pursue a career in graphic design. Studying graphic design and earing my degrees at Savannah College of Art and Design will allow me to explore new areas and discover career opportunities to become successful. Just like other art careers being a designer its required that you have the talent and direction as well as determination and commitment. I feel that there's more to a graphic designer than just skill. You need to be able to focus on your goals and be able to put fourth the time and effort to reach them along with deadlines.

Many Skills are needed in order to be a graphic designer. Being organized will help you with time management. Knowing and managing my time or setting deadlines has improved my judgment and decision making. Active learning helps with understanding information both current and future. My Critical thinking skills has helped me to identify some of my strengths and weaknesses of many different solutions or conclusions. Its important that I have a visual sensibility to understand what works and what doesn't work. I feel that as a graphic designer you should try doing things that will help you improve your taste and style. Deadlines are extremely tight and puts pressure on the designer, but with the help an a little experience working hard and studying will give me a fair chance of success.

I have to be able to complete task in a timely manner. Creating design concepts and knowing how to key information into computer equipment. Using computer software and understanding how things work Drawing and printing charts, graphs, illustrations, and other artwork using the computer. I do have knowledge of circuit boards, processors, chips, electronic equipment, and computer hardware and software.

My philosophy as a student will still remain the same and that is to stay on top of what you do. Face your problems to make a great outcome regardless if its an illustration or the click of a mouse I know that there are no limitations to the way I can express myself through art. As a student I'm willing to approach and execute the design of visual communications creatively and responsibly. looking forward to the study of fine arts, craftsmanship, and design theory along with other design experiences. I will show an exceptionally strong commitment to my work. Also I want to learn the fundamentals that every designer must know to be a success. From drawing to typography to more advanced and complex classes. I won't stop experimenting with the millions of ideas that I have stored in my head. I like to sit and brainstorm with others weather its in a classroom setting or outside of them classroom.

Re: My Essay I NEED HELP

Empham0us — Mon, 29 Oct 2007 09:09:25 GMT

thank you soooo much this means a lot. im gonna jump on the corrections ASAP.

Re: My Essay I NEED HELP

LillySchillz — Mon, 29 Oct 2007 08:29:58 GMT

paragraph 1: first sentence, not sure if you are meaning "something that i have grown to enjoy doing from designing logos, presentations, and posters."
fourth sentence: "like other art careers, being a designer requires one to have the talent, style, determination, and commitment.
sixth sentence: when you say "goal", that is singular, and you put "them" later in the sentence which is plural, either change "goal" to plural or "them" to singular.

2nd paragraph: 4th sentence: "active learning helps with understanding both current and future information" (since current and future are mentioned, there is no need to place "new" in the sentence because that would just be redundant)
5th sentence is just worded very weirdly. Try re-wording.
Take out all of the "you" in your essay and replace the "you"'s with "one".

i didn't finish editing your essay- most of your errors throughout your essay are similar, so the corrections i gave you should help you to find others i didn't go over.

My Essay I NEED HELP

Empham0us — Sun, 28 Oct 2007 20:02:20 GMT

Topic:

Graphic Design

Problem:

Im not that good with the grammer thing I really need help with mine. Can you please correct this and give me and idea on how to end this? It has to be 500-1000 words i have about 470

Essay:

Becoming a Graphic Designer is something that i have grown to enjoy doing from logos, presentations to posters. They all have given me the drive to pursue a career in graphic design. Studying graphic design and earing my degrees at Savannah College of Art and Design will allow me to explore new areas and discover career opportunities to become successful. Like other art careers being a designer its required that you have the talent and style as well as determination and commitment. I feel that there's more to a graphic designer than just skill. You need to be able to focus on your goal and be able to put fourth the time and effort to reach them along with deadlines.

Many Skills are needed in order to be a graphic designer. Being organized will help you with time management. Knowing and managing my time or setting deadlines has improved my judgment and decision making. Active learning helps with understanding new information both current and future. Critical thinking has helped me to identify some of my strengths and weaknesses of many different solutions or conclusions. Its important that I have a visual sensibility to understand what works and what doesn't work. I feel that as a graphic designer you should try doing things that will help you improve your taste and style. Deadlines are extremely tight and puts pressure on the designer, but with the help an a little experience working hard and studying will give me a fair chance of success.

My philosophy as a student will still remain the same and that is to stay on top of what you do. Face your problems to make a great outcome regardless if its an illustration or the click of a mouse I know that there are no limitations to the way i can express myself through art. As a student I'm willing to approach and execute the design of visual communications creatively and responsibly. I'm also looking forward to the study of fine arts, craftsmanship, and design theory along with other design experiences. I will show an exceptionally strong commitment to my work. Also I want to learn the fundamentals that every designer must know to be a success. From drawing to typography to more advanced and complex classes. I won't stop experimenting with the millions of ideas that I have stored in my head. I like to sit and brainstorm with others weather its in a classroom setting or outside of the classroom.