http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htmPost your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment, or just read for fun.enXMOD (Build: 3616.28671)http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseImproveTranslation/jdng/post.htm#110511Sun, 26 Apr 2009 12:51:22 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:110511Vigor0http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseImproveTranslation/jdng/post.htm#110511http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-110511.xmlDevils are white in Somalia. We call them "Djinn", and they lurk everywhere. (( they crawl in humans and animals )). They create illness, play nasty tricks with people and animals, and make them crazy. If something is missing, then you should know that the Djinn are behind it. My mother shouts at them:"Heyy!! Devils, go away from my things. They do not belong to you. You are unwanted!" Then she shows me that I have to turn away and rather do something else. If the Djinn are away, you will find the lost things again. My mother knows everything about Djinn and how to get rid of them. She knows many charms and spells with which (( leaves or barks )) you can get rid of them if you are ill. She collects plants, cooks roots, or give them raw...http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseImproveTranslation/jdng/post.htm#45322Tue, 26 May 2009 12:51:22 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:45322anon11http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseImproveTranslation/jdng/post.htm#45322http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-45322.xmlHi Greece80, I am not sure that my changes are accrurate. It's a first pass. Have a look and see if it is better. In Somalia the devils are white. We are call them djinn and they lurk everywhere. They crawl in humans and animals, whereupon they create illnesses, play nasty tricks, and make them crazy. If you put something anywhere and it is suddenly missing, then you know the djinn is responsible and is nearby. My mother shouted to them, ”He! Devil! Go away from my things. They don't belong you. You are undesirable!” Then she had shown me that you have to turn away and do nothing; if the djinn is away, you will find the lost thing again soon. My mother knows everything about the djinns and how you get rid them. She knows many...http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseImproveTranslation/jdng/post.htmThu, 26 Mar 2009 13:51:22 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:45311Greece802http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseImproveTranslation/jdng/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-45311.xmlHello everybody, to improve my english, I start with translate some texts. The problem is, that I don't know my mistakes, and so I would make this mistakes again and again. It would be very nice of you, if you can improve my first text. Thanks in advance _________________________ In Somalia are the devils white. We are calling them djinn and they lurk everywhere. They crawl in humans and animals, create illness, play nasty tricks with them and make them crazy. If you something lay up anywhere and it is missed suddenly, then you know the djinn is behind them. My mother shouted to them:”He! Devil! Go away from my things. Their arn’t belong you, you are undesirable!” Then she had shown me that you have to turn away and rather...