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<rss version="2.0" xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/" xmlns:slash="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/slash/" xmlns:wfw="http://wellformedweb.org/CommentAPI/"><channel><title>ESL Essay, Writing World</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/EslEssayWritingWorld/Forum9.htm</link><description>Post your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment or just read for fun.</description><dc:language>en</dc:language><generator>CSMOD (Build: 3260.39585)</generator><item><title>Re: can someone check what's wrong with this sentence?thank you!</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/SomeoneCheckWrongSentenceThank/zkkgm/post.htm#469739</link><pubDate>Mon, 28 Jan 2008 13:27:13 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:469739</guid><dc:creator>Grammar Geek</dc:creator><slash:comments>0</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/SomeoneCheckWrongSentenceThank/zkkgm/post.htm#469739</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-469739.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>&lt;P&gt;I disagree with her "correction." The "which" phrase that follows adds additional information and is non-restrictive. You will have to ask her.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;(You may be interested to know that I live only a few miles from "Amish country" here in the U.S.) &lt;/P&gt;&lt;div style="clear:both;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: can someone check what's wrong with this sentence?thank you!</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/SomeoneCheckWrongSentenceThank/zkkrr/post.htm#469625</link><pubDate>Mon, 28 Jan 2008 06:33:37 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:469625</guid><dc:creator>Blue_eyes</dc:creator><slash:comments>1</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/SomeoneCheckWrongSentenceThank/zkkrr/post.htm#469625</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-469625.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>&lt;P&gt;I think it 's okie too, but my teacher crossed out the comma ...Can you explain why did she do that?&lt;/P&gt;&lt;div style="clear:both;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: can someone check what's wrong with this sentence?thank you!</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/SomeoneCheckWrongSentenceThank/zkjnv/post.htm#469561</link><pubDate>Mon, 28 Jan 2008 02:29:14 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:469561</guid><dc:creator>Grammar Geek</dc:creator><slash:comments>2</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/SomeoneCheckWrongSentenceThank/zkjnv/post.htm#469561</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-469561.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>&lt;P&gt;&lt;BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;table width="85%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="txt4"&gt;&lt;img src="/Themes/default/images/icon-quote.gif"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;strong&gt;Blue_eyes wrote:&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="quoteTable"&gt;&lt;table width="100%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td width="100%" valign="top" class="txt4"&gt;The Amish take special pride in their barns, which are also meeting places &lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;&lt;STRONG&gt;f&lt;/STRONG&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;or church services.&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Surely you didn't mean just the typo?&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Which applies to the barns, so although I don't know that it's factually accurate, grammatically is seems okay.&lt;/P&gt;&lt;div style="clear:both;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</description></item><item><title>can someone check what's wrong with this sentence?thank you!</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/SomeoneCheckWrongSentenceThank/zkjml/post.htm</link><pubDate>Mon, 28 Jan 2008 02:04:02 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:469551</guid><dc:creator>Blue_eyes</dc:creator><slash:comments>3</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/SomeoneCheckWrongSentenceThank/zkjml/post.htm</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-469551.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>The Amish take special pride in their barns, which are also meeting places or church services.&lt;div style="clear:both;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</description></item></channel></rss>