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<rss version="2.0" xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/" xmlns:slash="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/slash/" xmlns:wfw="http://wellformedweb.org/CommentAPI/"><channel><title>ESL Essay, Writing World</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/EslEssayWritingWorld/Forum9.htm</link><description>Post your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment or just read for fun.</description><dc:language>en</dc:language><generator>CSMOD (Build: 3260.39585)</generator><item><title>Re: can someone correct this sentence for me plz? thanz a lot</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/SomeoneCorrectSentenceThanz/zkqhg/post.htm#471484</link><pubDate>Fri, 01 Feb 2008 13:55:22 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:471484</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><slash:comments>0</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/SomeoneCorrectSentenceThanz/zkqhg/post.htm#471484</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-471484.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>awesome, thank you &lt;img src="/emoticons/emotion-1.gif" alt="Smile [:)]" /&gt;)&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;ivo&lt;br&gt;&lt;div style="clear:both;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: can someone correct this sentence for me plz? thanz a lot</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/SomeoneCorrectSentenceThanz/zkqzw/post.htm#471452</link><pubDate>Fri, 01 Feb 2008 13:19:37 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:471452</guid><dc:creator>Grammar Geek</dc:creator><slash:comments>1</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/SomeoneCorrectSentenceThanz/zkqzw/post.htm#471452</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-471452.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>&lt;P&gt;No - &lt;EM&gt;At that time&lt;/EM&gt; requires the simple past, and don't use a comma after &lt;EM&gt;discovered&lt;/EM&gt;. &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;EM&gt;At that time, I discovered that what people had been saying about how time flies is true.&lt;/EM&gt; &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;But try something like this: &lt;EM&gt;It was then that I discovered the truth of what people have always said: Time does fly!&lt;/EM&gt;&lt;/P&gt;&lt;div style="clear:both;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: can someone correct this sentence for me plz? thanz a lot</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/SomeoneCorrectSentenceThanz/zkqdw/post.htm#471418</link><pubDate>Fri, 01 Feb 2008 11:25:19 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:471418</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><slash:comments>2</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/SomeoneCorrectSentenceThanz/zkqdw/post.htm#471418</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-471418.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>OK, I was wondering as well.. can I put it like..?&lt;br&gt;"At that time, I've discovered, what people had been saying, on how fast the time gose/flies.."&lt;br&gt;&lt;div style="clear:both;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: can someone correct this sentence for me plz? thanz a lot</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/SomeoneCorrectSentenceThanz/zkpmq/post.htm#471290</link><pubDate>Fri, 01 Feb 2008 00:47:31 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:471290</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><slash:comments>3</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/SomeoneCorrectSentenceThanz/zkpmq/post.htm#471290</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-471290.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>oh okie thanz my friend&lt;div style="clear:both;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: can someone correct this sentence for me plz? thanz a lot</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/SomeoneCorrectSentenceThanz/zkphk/post.htm#471199</link><pubDate>Thu, 31 Jan 2008 19:49:25 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:471199</guid><dc:creator>Avangi</dc:creator><slash:comments>5</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/SomeoneCorrectSentenceThanz/zkphk/post.htm#471199</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-471199.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>No good reason.&amp;nbsp; You've interrupted "what people said is true" with "about how time flies fast." It doesn't seem necessary to actually &lt;EM&gt;set it off&lt;/EM&gt;, but, it seems like when you read it, and especially when you speak it, you need to indicate where the joint comes.&amp;nbsp; If it were a little shorter, the brain (my brain in particular) could easily grasp it without the comma: " . . . what people say about time is true."&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; Or, " . . . what people say is true."&lt;div style="clear:both;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: can someone correct this sentence for me plz? thanz a lot</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/SomeoneCorrectSentenceThanz/zkpvd/post.htm#471141</link><pubDate>Thu, 31 Jan 2008 17:33:58 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:471141</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><slash:comments>5</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/SomeoneCorrectSentenceThanz/zkpvd/post.htm#471141</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-471141.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>why is there a comma before IS?&lt;div style="clear:both;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: can someone correct this sentence for me plz? thanz a lot</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/SomeoneCorrectSentenceThanz/zkprc/post.htm#471072</link><pubDate>Thu, 31 Jan 2008 15:20:10 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:471072</guid><dc:creator>Avangi</dc:creator><slash:comments>6</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/SomeoneCorrectSentenceThanz/zkprc/post.htm#471072</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-471072.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>&lt;BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;table width="85%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="txt4"&gt;&lt;img src="/Themes/default/images/icon-quote.gif"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;strong&gt;Anonymous wrote:&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="quoteTable"&gt;&lt;table width="100%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td width="100%" valign="top" class="txt4"&gt;
&lt;P&gt;At that time,&amp;nbsp;I discovered&amp;nbsp;&lt;STRONG&gt;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;[that]&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/STRONG&gt; what people &lt;STRIKE&gt;&lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;said&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/STRIKE&gt; &lt;STRONG&gt;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;say&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/STRONG&gt;&amp;nbsp;about how time flies fast&lt;STRONG&gt;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;,&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/STRONG&gt; is true&lt;STRONG&gt;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;.&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/STRONG&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;/P&gt;&lt;div style="clear:both;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</description></item><item><title>can someone correct this sentence for me plz? thanz a lot</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/SomeoneCorrectSentenceThanz/zkxkn/post.htm</link><pubDate>Thu, 31 Jan 2008 08:10:59 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:470964</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><slash:comments>7</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/SomeoneCorrectSentenceThanz/zkxkn/post.htm</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-470964.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>&lt;P&gt;At that time,&amp;nbsp;I discovered&amp;nbsp;what people said about how time flies fast is true&lt;/P&gt;&lt;div style="clear:both;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</description></item></channel></rss>