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Re: Letter_application

Fizzi — Mon, 03 Mar 2008 05:39:59 GMT

Thanks Mister Micawber!
Fizzi

Re: Letter_application

Mister Micawber — Wed, 27 Feb 2008 04:22:21 GMT

bachelor's degree

master's degree

Re: Letter_application

Kins_10 — Tue, 26 Feb 2008 22:52:35 GMT

Speaking of which, do we say bachelor'S degree too or just drop the 's'.

Re: Letter_application

Mister Micawber — Tue, 26 Feb 2008 22:43:59 GMT

I think it should be uncountable.

Re: Letter_application

Fizzi — Tue, 26 Feb 2008 22:09:08 GMT

Hi Mister Micawber,

I think it should be...but also to produce a high quality work.

Thanks again,

Fizzi

Re: Letter_application

Mister Micawber — Tue, 26 Feb 2008 13:10:26 GMT

1-An extension of the scholarship will enable me not only to complete my master's thesis, but also to produce a high quality master work. ['Master work' may be very wrong-- I don't know what you mean by this]

2- In addition, it will provide me with the opportunity to attend international conferences and present my research.

3. Similar application by another master candidate, (name of a candidate) from the University of S has been approved by the department of Y. -- This is an inappropriate idea to include in your applicaton; what other candidates have experienced is not relevant to your own merit.

Letter_application

Fizzi — Tue, 26 Feb 2008 09:52:12 GMT

Can somebody please help me with sentences?
Regards,
Fizzi

1-An extension of the scholarship will not only enable me to complete my master thesis, but also, to produce a high quality master work.
2- In addition, it will provide me with the opportunity to attend and present my research work in international conferences.
3. Similar application by another master candidate, (name of a candidate) from the University of S has been approved by the department of Y.