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Re: Please give an instruction of writing this topic.

Zoe young — Sun, 09 Mar 2008 15:36:11 GMT

The first thing i want to say is Thank you for your sincere advice.

I probably will not give up to take the exam, but to take it. Actually the day for the exam is around the corner.

Concern about the exam, i will try my best to eliminate the grammar mistakes and to have a breakthrough on the speed.

Re: Please give an instruction of writing this topic.

Anonymous — Sat, 08 Mar 2008 16:50:57 GMT

To be honest yet gentle at the same time, I would say your level of English is not up to the level of the task you have been assigned. I think you might want to reconsider the level of study you are attempting. Your sentences above show examples of quite basic ignorance (I mean that in the nicer sense) of grammar principles, even as basic as third person 's' and basic punctuation.

Anyway, you can do it! Chin up! I wish you the best.

Tom Kneil

Please give an instruction of writing this topic.

Zoe young — Sat, 08 Mar 2008 16:30:00 GMT

Please help me analyze this topic, thanks in advance.

ISSUE: The true value of a civilization is reflected in its artistic creations rather than in its scientific accomplishments.

my opinion is that civilization not only reflect in arctistic creations but also its scientfic accomplishment. The drastical change intrigued by scientific accomplishments in our lives is a strong relection of civilization. And the flourishing of various style of drawing, like impressionism,.. can also be a reflector of civilization.

And I hold that scientifc accomplishment can be a more surest reflection of civilization in that our human society progressed along with the development of science. Consider the Stone age, we use stone as the tools, with the progress in science we evolve into the Information era,

While the arctistic creations, even though it does, to some extent, reflect civilization of a society, it remains quite consistently the same, helping people to express the deepest private feelings, express one's political or social concerns, or simply offering people with aesthetic feelings.