http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htmPost your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment, or just read for fun.enXMOD (Build: 3616.28671)http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseReadGiveAdviceTheseEssays-Advance/zxbcd/post.htm#488203Wed, 27 May 2009 05:06:46 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:488203julielai0http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseReadGiveAdviceTheseEssays-Advance/zxbcd/post.htm#488203http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-488203.xmlYou stated your position in your second essay, Linhthao. Today, with the advancement of Internet, many laws have been created to protect private property. However, these laws seem not to fully consider the interest of users. Because T hey do not mention (wording) the high price of copyrighted material to the Internet community trait . From a college studentu's point of view, it should be legal to download or share those things from the Internet.http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseReadGiveAdviceTheseEssays-Advance/zxbcd/post.htm#488006Wed, 27 May 2009 05:06:46 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:488006Linhthao1http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseReadGiveAdviceTheseEssays-Advance/zxbcd/post.htm#488006http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-488006.xmlFirst and third essay: I suggest you state your position in the first paragraph. Uhm can you tell me more about it? I dont really know what you meanhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseReadGiveAdviceTheseEssays-Advance/zxbcd/post.htm#487733Tue, 27 Jan 2009 06:06:46 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:487733julielai2http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseReadGiveAdviceTheseEssays-Advance/zxbcd/post.htm#487733http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-487733.xmlFirst and third essay: I suggest you state your position in the first paragraph.http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseReadGiveAdviceTheseEssays-Advance/zxbcd/post.htmFri, 27 Feb 2009 06:06:46 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:486713Linhthao3http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseReadGiveAdviceTheseEssays-Advance/zxbcd/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-486713.xmlI am planning to practice on argumentative essays so it is helpful of you guys to give me some advice on these to improve my academic writing skills. You can choose to correct any essay you want. Thank you very much. Topic 1 : Whether or not you think new technology such as cellphones, computers, and DVDs benefit our society. With the development of our modernized society, every twenty minutes there comes a new technology. It gives us a lot of opportunities to raise our living standard and to have more convenient communication. Therefore, everyone has become more and more reliable on new technology such as cellphones, computers and DVDs because of its huge benefits. First of all, new technology has brought...