Re: correct my essay please!!

julielai — Sat, 12 Apr 2008 13:51:26 GMT

Each country is presented by its own culture. (You first have to mention there are three symbols.) Proudly, Kingdom of Saudi Arabia is known by the two Holy Mosques in Makkah AL-Mukarrama and AL-Madinah AL-Monawara in the western region. They are ~~real symbols for my country~~ where ~~its the original place of spreading~~ Islam was originally spread.They show how all Muslims are united under ~~the~~ God~~'s worship~~. There is a beautiful scene which we can see during prayer time. They all make organized rows to bow and prostrate their foreheads to Allah. This scene is viewed all over the world which attract many non-Muslims to embrace Islam. The palm tree is considered as the second symbol ~~which presents my country~~. It's (What is it's?) called a country of million palms . Most of Saudi people who live in the northern , eastern and western region plant dates of all ~~its~~ kinds. Saudi Arabia imports dates all over the world. So the Saudi government uses the palm with two swords as its motto. Oil is the third famous symbol ~~which presents my country~~. It is well-known ~~information~~ that the Kingdom of Saudi Arabia has the most ~~substituted~~ oil in the world . Saudi Arabia has many oil wells in the western region where ARAMCO established.

Anyway, all these symbols are considered as blessings from Allah. "Exalted is He". So we have to thank Him frequently .

correct my essay please!!

Sadeem — Fri, 11 Apr 2008 22:37:43 GMT

Each country is presented by its own culture. Proudly, Kingdom of Saudi Arabia is known by the two Holy Mosques in Makkah AL-Mukarrama and AL-Madinah AL-Monawara in the western region. They are real symbols for my country where its the original place of spreading Islam .They show how all Muslims united under the God's worship. There is the beautiful scene which we can see during prayer time. They all make organized rows to bow and prostrate their foreheads to Allah. This scene is viewed all over the world which attract many non-Muslims to embrace Islam. The palm tree is considered as the second symbol which presents my country. It's called a country of million palms . Most of Saudi people who live in the northern , eastern and western region plant dates with all its kinds. Saudi Arabia imports dates all over the world. So the Saudi government uses the palm with two swords in its motto. Oil is the third famous symbol which presents my country. It is well-known information that Kingdom of Saudi Arabia has the most substituted oil all over the world . Saudi Arabia has many oil wells in the western region where ARAMCO established.

Anyway, all these symbols are considered as blessings from Allah "Exalted is He". So we have to thank Him frequently .

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