http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htmPost your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment, or just read for fun.enXMOD (Build: 3615.29165)http://www.englishforums.com/English/ClosingTheGapAgain/kdbk/post.htm#50103Tue, 24 Mar 2009 18:17:59 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:50103anon10http://www.englishforums.com/English/ClosingTheGapAgain/kdbk/post.htm#50103http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-50103.xmlUva2004, I very quickly skimmed over your document. Your essays appears somewhat unorganized to me. I don't see a logical progession of your argument. If you and I were going up an escalator together, how would you describe your argument/essay? In other words, how would you briefly describe the argument? Also, your essay is hard to read. You need to put some spaces between your paragraphs. Hope those comments help. MountainHikerhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/ClosingTheGapAgain/kdbk/post.htmSun, 24 May 2009 17:17:59 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:50024uva20041http://www.englishforums.com/English/ClosingTheGapAgain/kdbk/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-50024.xmlClosing the Gap Posted: 12-10-2004 04:17 AM Please read, edit, and critique this critical analysis paper. I am new at this forum. I am unsure how it works. Please help if you can! I need feedback before October 13. Thanks _____________________________________________________________________________ Closing the gap, that's what the nation's oldest used and misused college entrance exam will do in March 2005, according to the College Board. The SAT has long been controversial, a cultural bias examination that eliminates academically promising minority and low-income students who apply with strong academic records to college but with relatively low SAT scores are often overlooked by admissions counselors for entrance into colleges....