http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htmPost your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment, or just read for fun.enXMOD (Build: 3615.39139)http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayProofread/kdkl/post.htm#50200Sat, 25 Apr 2009 04:51:44 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:50200anon10http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayProofread/kdkl/post.htm#50200http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-50200.xmlHi, I hope my comments are helpful and good luck. MountainHikerhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayProofread/kdkl/post.htm#50196Sun, 25 Jan 2009 05:51:44 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:50196ESL1231http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayProofread/kdkl/post.htm#50196http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-50196.xmlThank You very much for your comment. I will rewrite it by following your outline.http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayProofread/kdkl/post.htm#50189Sat, 25 Apr 2009 04:51:44 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:50189anon12http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayProofread/kdkl/post.htm#50189http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-50189.xmlHi, My comments are that your essay wanders too much. Or in other words, your essay needs a tighter focus. Your grammar is actually pretty good. It’s your organization of your essay where you need to apply the most attention. Try making an outline: 1) Love is a four letter word. 2) There are 6 types of love a. Friendship b. Romantic c. Sexual d. Committed e. Family f. One yet to be identified 3) Friendship Love a. Point 1 b. Point 2 c. Point 3 d. Point 4 e. Summary 4) Romantic Love a. Point 1 b. Point 2 c. Point 3 d. Point 4 e. Summary 5) Sexual Love a. Point 1 b. Point 2 c. Point 3 d. Point 4 e. Summary 6) Committed Love a. Point 1 b. Point 2 c. Point 3 d. Point 4 e. Summary 7) Family Love ...http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayProofread/kdkl/post.htm#50186Sun, 25 Jan 2009 05:51:44 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:50186anon13http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayProofread/kdkl/post.htm#50186http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-50186.xmlESL123, i'm sorry that i didn't space the paragraph to make it easy for you guys to read Yeah, me too. But I will look at it and provide some initial comments soon. MountainHikerhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayProofread/kdkl/post.htm#50179Sun, 25 Jan 2009 05:51:44 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:50179ESL1234http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayProofread/kdkl/post.htm#50179http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-50179.xmli'm sorry that i didn't space the paragraph to make it easy for you guys to readhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayProofread/kdkl/post.htmSat, 25 Apr 2009 04:51:44 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:50178ESL1235http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayProofread/kdkl/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-50178.xmlWriting is not one of my strong area i'm really bad at grammar can some please proofread this for me. THank you in advance i'll appriciate your help Love is the four letter words that all of us have experienced before we could walk and throughout our life. Our love towards other can be express by our actions or by tell them that you love them. Love can increase one’s person strength. There are at least six types of love. The first type of love is friendship love. Friendship love is the love toward your friends. This love can be express by caring, trusting, sharing, and supporting. When we were young we express this love to everyone in either our pre kindergarten class or to who ever we hang out with because we did not know how to...