http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htmPost your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment, or just read for fun.enXMOD (Build: 3607.32596)http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseProofreadEssay/kdxc/post.htm#50311Fri, 23 Jan 2009 02:42:43 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:50311ESL1230http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseProofreadEssay/kdxc/post.htm#50311http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-50311.xmlTHANK YOU for your great commenthttp://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseProofreadEssay/kdxc/post.htm#50268Mon, 23 Mar 2009 02:42:43 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:50268anon11http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseProofreadEssay/kdxc/post.htm#50268http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-50268.xmlHi, I am going to comment on three of your paragraphs, and then let you finish your essay. We are going to examine your first and second paragraphs, as well as your paragraph on sexual love. **First Paragraph** Love is a passionate four letter word that all of us have experienced before. Love can be express by mostly actions and words. Love is a feeling that can increase one’s personal strength, it’s the way your mom would give her life for yours without blinking twice, and it’s the way you would sacrifice what you want to put that smile on other people’s face. Love is also countless giving with no expectations of anything being returned. All of these aspects of love fall in these 6 categories: family, self-love,...http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseProofreadEssay/kdxc/post.htmMon, 23 Feb 2009 02:42:43 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:50237ESL1232http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseProofreadEssay/kdxc/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-50237.xmlLove is a passionate four letter word that all of us have experienced before. Love can be express by mostly actions and words. Love is a feeling that can increase one’s personal strength, it’s the way your mom would give her life for yours without blinking twice, and it’s the way you would sacrifice what you want to put that smile on other people’s face. Love is also countless giving with no expectations of anything being returned. All of these aspects of love fall in these 6 categories: family, self-love, friendships, sexual, and committed. Each of these different flavors of love has unique aspects and characteristics. But all share a common trait of deep caring and respect. Self-love, the term greedy would come to the mind of many...