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Review, comment or just read for fun.enCSMOD (Build: 3260.39585)http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldSomeoneParagraph/gbxvb/post.htm#510154Tue, 06 May 2008 01:43:12 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:510154babyblue_girl080http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldSomeoneParagraph/gbxvb/post.htm#510154http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-510154.xml&nbsp;i know,that why im here to ask help and i think i can&#39;t fix all my mistake,beacuse i need to pass it for tomorrow and English is my third language that why i&#39;m so poor of it.<br /><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldSomeoneParagraph/gbxdm/post.htm#510148Tue, 06 May 2008 01:31:35 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:510148Mister Micawber1http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldSomeoneParagraph/gbxdm/post.htm#510148http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-510148.xml.<br />That&#39;s no way to learn English.&nbsp; Put some effort into this.&nbsp; You&#39;re the one getting graded, not I.<br /><br /><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldSomeoneParagraph/gbxdj/post.htm#510145Tue, 06 May 2008 01:24:54 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:510145babyblue_girl082http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldSomeoneParagraph/gbxdj/post.htm#510145http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-510145.xmli know, i have a huge problem with the verb tense. can i ask a favor? if you don&#39;t mind can you fix it for me? Can u change the verb tenses for me? Because i really need it for tomorrow in English class. Can u please help me?<br /><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldSomeoneParagraph/gbxdb/post.htm#510137Tue, 06 May 2008 00:24:21 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:510137Mister Micawber3http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldSomeoneParagraph/gbxdb/post.htm#510137http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-510137.xml.<br /><em>I have underlined some problem areas:</em><br /><br /><br /><h2><span style="text-decoration:underline;">hi</span> <span style="text-decoration:underline;">everyone, </span>can <span style="text-decoration:underline;">u</span> guys <span style="text-decoration:underline;">please this</span> paragraph for me? I really need to fix this paragraph to pass my <span style="text-decoration:underline;">engllish</span> class. So please help me to check my grammar. Thanks in advance</h2><p>In the letter written by Ernesto Meza to <span style="text-decoration:underline;">city</span> of Stockton, he tells about his concerns and his <span style="text-decoration:underline;">neighbor </span>concerns about missing <span style="text-decoration:underline;">light</span> in their area. He <span style="text-decoration:underline;">had mentions</span> some crime that <span style="text-decoration:underline;">happen</span> in their area because of the failure of the street light. I feel <span style="text-decoration:underline;">disappoint to</span> the city of Stockton because since<span style="text-decoration:underline;"> too many of letter</span> had sent to them but they didn’t <span style="text-decoration:underline;">do any action</span>. I know Ernesto and his <span style="text-decoration:underline;">neighbors all</span> they <span style="text-decoration:underline;">want just</span> a street light so that they can be safe.</p> <p>After <span style="text-decoration:underline;">read</span> this letter, I feel lucky that I live in a safe area and I don’t need to worry about the street light and <span style="text-decoration:underline;">leave</span> the house with no <span style="text-decoration:underline;">one watch </span>over it. Back in the Philippines I <span style="text-decoration:underline;">had been</span> living there several years but I didn’t<span style="text-decoration:underline;"> hear</span> any crime and I don’t have any <span style="text-decoration:underline;">problem</span> with my <span style="text-decoration:underline;">neighbor</span>. Every time I got home late from school I <span style="text-decoration:underline;">feel </span>safe because of the street light.</p> <p>On <span style="text-decoration:underline;">the</span> summer day we used to go to my <span style="text-decoration:underline;">cousin</span> house for our <span style="text-decoration:underline;">vacation, every</span> time we leave the house my mom<span style="text-decoration:underline;"> feels cared</span> because no one watches our house. I always said to <span style="text-decoration:underline;">her “mom</span> just turns the light on, so that everyone <span style="text-decoration:underline;">thought</span> someone in the house and they <span style="text-decoration:underline;">don’t</span> have any <span style="text-decoration:underline;">attention</span> to steal something in our house<em>” I</em> know she <span style="text-decoration:underline;">worry</span> <span style="text-decoration:underline;">to leave </span>the house <span style="text-decoration:underline;">for long</span> time and no one <span style="text-decoration:underline;">watch</span> over it. After our vacation we <span style="text-decoration:underline;">went</span> back home <span style="text-decoration:underline;">save </span>and I <span style="text-decoration:underline;">feel</span> glad that nothing had been stolen from our house. I think the reason that makes the<span style="text-decoration:underline;"> place safe is because of</span> the street lights.</p> <p>I understand <span style="text-decoration:underline;">how</span> Ernesto Meza writes this letter to the city of Stockton because he <span style="text-decoration:underline;">was</span> concerns about the safety in his area. I know street lights are really important to us, because<span style="text-decoration:underline;"> it</span> can make us safe. So I hope the city of Stockton<span style="text-decoration:underline;"> should </span>do<span style="text-decoration:underline;"> any</span> action for them.</p><br /><p></p><p>Y<em>ou have good ideas, but you must work on your verb tenses especially.</em></p><p></p><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldSomeoneParagraph/gbmjn/post.htmMon, 05 May 2008 06:17:21 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:509673babyblue_girl084http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldSomeoneParagraph/gbmjn/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-509673.xml&nbsp;</p><h2><font>&nbsp;hi everyone, can u guys please this paragraph for me? I really need to fix this paragraph to pass my engllish class. So please help me to check my grammar. Thanks in advance<font color="#00ccff"> <img src="http://www.englishforums.com/emoticons/emotion-1.gif" alt="Smile" title="Smile" /></font></font></h2> <p>&nbsp;</p> <p>In the letter written by Ernesto Meza to city of Stockton, he tells about his concerns and his neighbor concerns about missing light in their area. He had mentions some crime that happen in their area because of the failure of the street light. I feel disappoint to the city of Stockton because since too many of letter had sent to them but they didn’t do any action. I know Ernesto and his neighbors all they want just a street light so that they can be safe.</p> <p>&nbsp;</p> <p>After read this letter, I feel lucky that I live in a safe area and I don’t need to worry about the street light and leave the house with no one watch over it. Back in the Philippines I had been living there several years but I didn’t hear any crime and I don’t have any problem with my neighbor. Every time I got home late from school I feel safe because of the street light.</p> <p>&nbsp;</p> <p>On the summer day we used to go to my cousin house for our vacation, every time we leave the house my mom feels cared because no one watches our house. I always said to her “mom just turns the light on, so that everyone thought someone in the house and they don’t have any attention to steal something in our house” I know she worry to leave the house for long time and no one watch over it. After our vacation we went back home save and I feel glad that nothing had been stolen from our house. I think the reason that makes the place safe is because of the street lights.</p> <p>&nbsp;</p> <p>I understand how Ernesto Meza writes this letter to the city of Stockton because he was concerns about the safety in his area. I know street lights are really important to us, because it can make us safe. So I hope the city of Stockton should do any action for them.</p> <p>&nbsp;<div style="clear:both;"></div>