http://www.englishforums.com/English/EslEssayWritingWorld/Forum9.htmPost your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment or just read for fun.enCSMOD (Build: 3191.21962)http://www.englishforums.com/English/IsItCorrect/gccdc/post.htm#511583Fri, 09 May 2008 10:19:54 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:511583Old Man Gordon0http://www.englishforums.com/English/IsItCorrect/gccdc/post.htm#511583http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-511583.xml<p>[help]</p> <p>[help]</p> <p>the decision-making process in terms of improving it, providing...</p><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/IsItCorrect/gcbnd/post.htmFri, 09 May 2008 02:58:03 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:511465poci_wasiats1http://www.englishforums.com/English/IsItCorrect/gcbnd/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-511465.xml<p style="text-align:justify;">can someone check my paragraph??&nbsp;</p><p style="text-align:justify;"><span>Decision-making is common processes in companies. Every manager has to announce new decisions in order to achieve company [objectives/goals]. Actually, to achieve the [objectives/goals], managers need supports or evidences to [assist/help] them make better decisions. Turban (2007) says, Business Intelligence (BI) collects and analyses historical data to generate models or reports in order to [assist/help] decision makers to decide appropriate decisions. Therefore, Yates says “<i>…The quality of those decisions can be no better than the quality of the judgments supporting them</i>”. This essay will evaluate the benefits of BI for decision-making process in terms to [enhance/improve] the decision-making process, provide appropriate models to make better decisions and forecasting.</span></p><div style="clear:both;"></div>