http://www.englishforums.com/English/EslEssayWritingWorld/Forum9.htmPost your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment or just read for fun.enCSMOD (Build: 3191.21962)http://www.englishforums.com/English/InconvenientCustom/gczbv/post.htm#512418Sun, 11 May 2008 12:19:59 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:512418Mister Micawber0http://www.englishforums.com/English/InconvenientCustom/gczbv/post.htm#512418http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-512418.xml.<br /><em>I have underlined some problem areas:</em><span style="color:#111111;"><br /><br /></span><span style="color:#22364b;">I <span style="text-decoration:underline;">got gift</span> return for the cash gift to my nephew and niece for their <span style="text-decoration:underline;">school start</span>. I gave them cash because <span style="text-decoration:underline;">they want to buy anything they want</span>, and I received just half the price <span style="text-decoration:underline;">of department</span> store coupon and some <span style="text-decoration:underline;">sweet</span>. This <span style="text-decoration:underline;">might sounds</span> ridiculous and inconvenient, but some people <span style="text-decoration:underline;">tale it rude</span> if you do not pay back half the price of the gift you received. I hate this <span style="text-decoration:underline;">custom especially</span> for <span style="text-decoration:underline;">the wedding</span>. <span style="text-decoration:underline;">At wedding</span> ceremony, you <span style="text-decoration:underline;">paid</span> not a small amount of money and receive <span style="text-decoration:underline;">tons of return mostly heavy and unpleasant</span>. In my closet, there are lots of wedding gift returns <span style="text-decoration:underline;">even with just low numbers of </span>wedding <span style="text-decoration:underline;">ceremony</span>. </span><span style="color:#22364b;"><span style="text-decoration:underline;">Things getting</span> changed to more <span style="text-decoration:underline;">simply</span> and cost <span style="text-decoration:underline;">effectively</span> little by little. Sometimes I feel funny because I feel <span style="text-decoration:underline;">you</span> are rude because <span style="text-decoration:underline;">you</span> are complaining <span style="text-decoration:underline;">you does</span> not receive anything just because<span style="text-decoration:underline;"> you give</span> unnecessary things to someone.</span><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/InconvenientCustom/gczrc/post.htmSun, 11 May 2008 11:27:48 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:512399Anonymous1http://www.englishforums.com/English/InconvenientCustom/gczrc/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-512399.xml<span style="COLOR:#22364b;">Would you please point out my errors. Thank you.</span><span style="COLOR:#22364b;">I got gift return for the cash gift to my nephew and niece for their school start. I gave them cash because they want to buy anything they want, and I received just half the price of department store coupon and some sweet. This might sounds ridiculous and inconvenient, but some people tale it rude if you do not pay back half the price of the gift you received. I hate this custom especially for the wedding. At wedding ceremony, you paid not a small amount of money and receive tons of return mostly heavy and unpleasant. In my closet, there are lots of wedding gift returns even with just low numbers of wedding ceremony. </span><span style="COLOR:#22364b;">Things getting changed to more simply and cost effectively little by little. Sometimes I feel funny because I feel you are rude because you are complaining you does not receive anything just because you give unnecessary things to someone. </span> <p>&nbsp;</p><div style="clear:both;"></div>