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Re: Sentences

Fizzi — Sun, 18 May 2008 11:47:19 GMT

Hi Clive,
Thanks for your help.
Regards,
Fizzi

Re: Sentences

Clive — Fri, 16 May 2008 00:34:43 GMT

Hi again, Fizzi,

Can somebody please help me with the English?

Almost all studies noted that this information was (?) often available (more than 93.5%) in India in 1983, the UK, the US, and France. However, newspapers that were evaluated in Mexico and another Indian study which was also conducted in 1983 found much lower information, less than 70.8 and 66% respectively.

93.5% of what? 70.8% and 66% of what?

If you say a year for India, the sentence structure seems to suggest that you should also say a year for the UK/US/France.

What does lower information mean? Do you mean 'a lower rate? Lower availability?

When were the newspapers in Mexico evaluated? 1983? Or is that date just for the other Indian study?

Best wishes, Clive

Sentences

Fizzi — Fri, 16 May 2008 00:21:39 GMT

Hi all,
Can somebody please help me with the English?

Almost all studies noted that this information often available (more than 93.5%) in India in 1983, the UK, the US, and France. However, newspapers that were evaluated in Mexico and another Indian study which was also conducted in 1983 found much lower information, less than 70.8 and 66% respectively.

Regards,

Fizzi