http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htmPost your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment, or just read for fun.enXMOD (Build: 3615.39139)http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseProofreadMyEssay/gdwkv/post.htm#519780Mon, 25 May 2009 10:00:39 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:519780RayH0http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseProofreadMyEssay/gdwkv/post.htm#519780http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-519780.xmlI notice you have posted this several times. I don't mean to come across as rude, but I doubt anyone has the time or interest to go through this whole thing. You might get a better response if you separate out the sections you are least confident in and post them separately. No more than two paragraphs per post.http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseProofreadMyEssay/gdwkv/post.htmMon, 25 May 2009 10:00:39 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:518351swedishgirl1http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseProofreadMyEssay/gdwkv/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-518351.xmlMy name is Kristina and I would really appreciate some help to proofread my essay on workers' conditions in the garment industry in India. Any help would be very much appreciated! Kristina What Civil Society Does to Make the Garment Industry Fairer A Minor Field Study Conducted in Tirupur , India about the Conditions in the Garment Industry and How Civil Society Actors Work to Improve Them