http://www.englishforums.com/English/EslEssayWritingWorld/Forum9.htmPost your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment or just read for fun.enCSMOD (Build: 3260.39585)http://www.englishforums.com/English/WritingSenatorSomeoneProofWriting/klpx/post.htm#52578Thu, 28 Oct 2004 21:15:57 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:52578anon10http://www.englishforums.com/English/WritingSenatorSomeoneProofWriting/klpx/post.htm#52578http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-52578.xmlHi, <br /> <br />The piece of information that seems to be missing is was your husband's application turned down? Anyway, I cleaned up your letter somewhat. It might not be perfect, but it is better than it was. <br /> <br />MountainHiker <br /> <br /> <br /> <br />I was recently sworn in as American citizen but my husband still lives in country X, my country of origin. I would like to have my husband visit me for the holidays. My son who is in the Navy consulted with people at the National Visa Center and they informed him that it is not important that I filed an immigrant visa petition for my husband since he is only visiting for couple of months. <br /> <br />Also, I am enclosing copies of the nonimmigrant visa application and my husband's passport showing the stamp by one of the consular in the embassy. I am asking you to use your good office to help me so that my husband can be granted a visitor’s visa. <br /> <br />Thank you very much for your assistance in this matter. <br /> <br />Sincerely yours, <br /> <br />You. <br /> <br /><hr> <br /> <br />I know that you’re not a member of the judiciary committee but you equally for the overall quality of life for the men, women, and families of the United States. - This sentence is only clutter. Do not include.http://www.englishforums.com/English/WritingSenatorSomeoneProofWriting/klpg/post.htmThu, 28 Oct 2004 20:03:37 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:52570marynkenke1http://www.englishforums.com/English/WritingSenatorSomeoneProofWriting/klpg/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-52570.xmlCan someone proof this for me as I have to send it out today. Thanks <br /> <br />Please can someone review this letter and let me know if it is ok to send it to my senator: <br /> <br />I am one of the recently swear in American citizen and my husband still leave in my old country of origin, and would like for him to visit me for the holidays. My son who is in the Navy consulted the National Visa Center a while ago and they informed him that it is not important that I filed an immigrant visa petition for my husband since he is only visiting for couple of months. <br /> <br />I know that you’re not a member of the judiciary committee but you equally for the overall quality of life for the men, women, and families of the United States. <br /> <br />Also, am enclosing copies of the nonimmigrant visa application and my husband passport showing the stamp by one of the consular in the embassy. I am asking you to use your good office to look into this matter and see what you can do to help me so that my husband can be granted a visitor’s visa. <br /> <br />Sincerely yours, <br />