Re: please, help me to check some sentences

Mr Wordy — Sun, 29 Jun 2008 11:14:59 GMT

Stuffed vine leaves are rich and tasty. Make them for a special occasion, or just add a twist to your everyday menu. Of course, this dish will require some fuss, but it's worth the effort. Stuffed vine leaves supply many nutrients our body needs. [If you stuff them with things that supply many of those nutrients, then yes, obviously. If that's all you mean then I don't think it's worth saying. If you mean the vine leaves themselves supply many nutrients then I think this needs to come across more clearly.] As a stuffing, [?? I feel this sentence needs to link in a bit better with what came before] meat, rice and vegetables work together to create a terrific taste. Vine leaves ~~give it this~~ give them a special and unique flavor.

please, help me to check some sentences

changeling — Sat, 28 Jun 2008 13:28:05 GMT

Hi everybody!

Will you, please, help me to check the following sentences or make them sound better.

Stuffed vine leaves are rich and tasty. Make them for special occasion, or just add a twist to your everyday menu. Of course, this dish will require some fuss, but it's worth the effort. Stuffed vine leaves supply many nutrients our body needs. Meat, rice and vegetables work together to create terrific taste. Vine leaves give it this special and unique flavor

Thanks in advance

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Re: please, help me to check some sentences

please, help me to check some sentences