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<rss version="2.0" xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/" xmlns:slash="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/slash/" xmlns:wfw="http://wellformedweb.org/CommentAPI/"><channel><title>ESL Essay, Writing World</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/EslEssayWritingWorld/Forum9.htm</link><description>Post your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment or just read for fun.</description><dc:language>en</dc:language><generator>CSMOD (Build: 3260.39585)</generator><item><title>Re: Please check my writing.</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckMyWriting/ghdvv/post.htm#536456</link><pubDate>Thu, 03 Jul 2008 23:00:23 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:536456</guid><dc:creator>Feebs11</dc:creator><slash:comments>0</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckMyWriting/ghdvv/post.htm#536456</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-536456.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>&lt;p&gt;&lt;BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;img src="/Themes/englishforums/images/icon-quote.gif"&gt; &lt;strong&gt;Anonymous&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;div&gt; &lt;div align="left"&gt;My name is Kwanruean Somphanphae. My nickname is L. &lt;/div&gt; &lt;div align="left"&gt;&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div align="left"&gt;I am 19 years old. I live in Bangkok,Thailand. I have&lt;b&gt; three&lt;/b&gt; brothers. &lt;/div&gt; &lt;div align="left"&gt;&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div align="left"&gt;And I have &lt;u&gt;the best friends 2 person. Her name is Tik and Aom.&amp;nbsp;&lt;/u&gt;&lt;b&gt; two good friends who are Tik and Aom.&lt;/b&gt; &lt;/div&gt; &lt;div align="left"&gt;&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div align="left"&gt;I like to &lt;u&gt;shopping &lt;/u&gt;&lt;b&gt;shop &lt;/b&gt;at JJ. Market because it is very cheap.&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div align="left"&gt;&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div align="left"&gt;&lt;b&gt;Four &lt;/b&gt;years ago I &lt;u&gt;learned&lt;/u&gt; &lt;b&gt;studied &lt;/b&gt;at Siam Business Administration &lt;b&gt;C&lt;/b&gt;ollege &lt;b&gt;with a&amp;nbsp;&lt;/b&gt; major in foreign language. &lt;/div&gt; &lt;div align="left"&gt;&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div align="left"&gt;&lt;u&gt;And then&lt;/u&gt; &lt;b&gt;Now &lt;/b&gt;I &lt;b&gt;am &lt;/b&gt;studying at Chandrakasem Rajabhat University&lt;b&gt; with a&lt;/b&gt; major in Business English. &lt;/div&gt; &lt;div align="left"&gt;&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div align="left"&gt;When I &lt;u&gt;graduation&lt;/u&gt;&lt;b&gt; graduate &lt;/b&gt;I want to be air hostess&lt;b&gt; be&lt;/b&gt;cause I like to meet people and I love to travel. &lt;/div&gt; &lt;div align="left"&gt;&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div align="left"&gt;But I am short. It is impossible. Finally I want to speak English &lt;u&gt;excellent&lt;/u&gt;.&lt;b&gt;properly/really well&lt;/b&gt; &lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;div style="clear:both;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</description></item><item><title>Please check my writing.</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckMyWriting/ghrpx/post.htm</link><pubDate>Wed, 02 Jul 2008 12:25:59 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:535786</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><slash:comments>1</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckMyWriting/ghrpx/post.htm</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-535786.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>&lt;div&gt; &lt;div align="left"&gt;My name is Kwanruean Somphanphae. My nickname is L. &lt;/div&gt; &lt;div align="left"&gt;&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div align="left"&gt;I am 19 years old. I live in Bangkok,Thailand. I have 3 brothers. &lt;/div&gt; &lt;div align="left"&gt;&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div align="left"&gt;And I have the best friends 2 person. Her name is Tik and Aom. &lt;/div&gt; &lt;div align="left"&gt;&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div align="left"&gt;I like to shopping at JJ. Market because it is very cheap.&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div align="left"&gt;&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div align="left"&gt;4 years ago I learned at Siam Business Administration college major in foreign language. &lt;/div&gt; &lt;div align="left"&gt;&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div align="left"&gt;And then I studying at Chandrakasem Rajabhat University major in Business English. &lt;/div&gt; &lt;div align="left"&gt;&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div align="left"&gt;When I graduation I want to be air hostess. Because I like to meet people and I love to travel. &lt;/div&gt; &lt;div align="left"&gt;&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div align="left"&gt;But I am short. It is impossible. Finally I want to speak English excellent. &lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div style="clear:both;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</description></item></channel></rss>