Re: Check my writing please.

Feebs11 — Thu, 03 Jul 2008 22:56:39 GMT

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My name is Natchaya. My last name is Sakdee. Everyone at college and my family call me Cha-om, my nickname. But usually only teachers call me Miss Natchaya. I am 22 years old. And I am from the south part of Thailand, Phatthalung. My native language is Thai. I am a forth fourth year student at Chadrakasem Rajabhat University. My major is English. So I help my parents by working in a part-time job at a department store.My work starts from hour s are 11:00a.m. until 8:00 p.m. every Saturday and Sunday. I don't have enough time to rest because I have to do my home work and prepare my study for the next day. I feel tired but I have to work. I save am savng money for my study. And studies and I can have extra money to spend on new books, which I want.

Check my writing please.

Anonymous — Wed, 02 Jul 2008 12:29:13 GMT

My name is Natchaya. My last name is Sakdee. Everyone at college and my family call me Cha-om, my nickname. But usually only teachers call me Miss Natchaya. I am 22 years old. And I am from the south part of Thailand, Phatthalung. My native language is Thai. I am a forth year student at Chadrakasem Rajabhat University. My major is English. So I help my parents by working as a part-time job at a department store.My work starts from 11:00 until 8:00 p.m. every Saturday and sunday. I don't have enough time to rest because I have to do my home work and prepare my study for the next day. I feel tired but I have to work. I save money for my study. And I can have extra money to spend on new books, which I want.

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Check my writing please.