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<rss version="2.0" xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/" xmlns:slash="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/slash/" xmlns:wfw="http://wellformedweb.org/CommentAPI/"><channel><title>ESL Essay, Writing World</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/EslEssayWritingWorld/Forum9.htm</link><description>Post your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment or just read for fun.</description><dc:language>en</dc:language><generator>CSMOD (Build: 3260.39585)</generator><item><title>Re: Check my sentences, please</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CheckMySentencesPlease/ghvnp/post.htm#536909</link><pubDate>Sat, 05 Jul 2008 07:35:15 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:536909</guid><dc:creator>Tanit</dc:creator><slash:comments>0</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CheckMySentencesPlease/ghvnp/post.htm#536909</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-536909.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>&amp;quot;&lt;strike&gt;I study sofamore at CRU univercity.&lt;/strike&gt;&amp;quot; &amp;gt;&amp;gt; I am a sophomore at CRU University.&lt;div style="clear:both;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: Check my sentences, please</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CheckMySentencesPlease/ghvmw/post.htm#536885</link><pubDate>Sat, 05 Jul 2008 04:59:38 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:536885</guid><dc:creator>26TMNTJG2PG</dc:creator><slash:comments>1</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CheckMySentencesPlease/ghvmw/post.htm#536885</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-536885.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>My name is Apiwat Runesukrudee. My nickname is Art. I&amp;#39;m 19 years old. I&amp;#39;m from Bangkok.&lt;br /&gt;I like to play Badminton and football because &lt;strike&gt;it very&lt;/strike&gt; &lt;span style="COLOR:#ff0000;"&gt;they are&lt;/span&gt; fun and &lt;strike&gt;eazy&lt;/strike&gt; &lt;span style="COLOR:#ff0000;"&gt;easy&lt;/span&gt; to play. I like &lt;strike&gt;Japannees&lt;/strike&gt; &lt;span style="COLOR:#ff0000;"&gt;Japanese&lt;/span&gt; food,&lt;br /&gt;Chinese food and Thai food. I have a sister &lt;span style="COLOR:#ff0000;"&gt;and&lt;/span&gt; she is 11 years old&lt;span style="COLOR:#ff0000;"&gt;.&lt;/span&gt; &lt;strike&gt;and&lt;/strike&gt; I stay with my family. I study&lt;br /&gt;sofamore at CRU univercity. In &lt;strike&gt;a&lt;/strike&gt; &lt;span style="COLOR:#ff0000;"&gt;my&lt;/span&gt; free time&lt;span style="COLOR:#ff0000;"&gt;, &lt;/span&gt;I like to read &lt;strike&gt;a &lt;/strike&gt;cartoon books and play computer games. I don&amp;#39;t know &lt;span style="COLOR:#ff0000;"&gt;what I&lt;/span&gt; want to be in the future.&lt;div style="clear:both;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</description></item><item><title>Check my sentences, please</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CheckMySentencesPlease/ghdhz/post.htm</link><pubDate>Fri, 04 Jul 2008 02:49:44 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:536508</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><slash:comments>2</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CheckMySentencesPlease/ghdhz/post.htm</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-536508.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>My name is Apiwat Runesukrudee. My nickname is Art. I&amp;#39;m 19 years old. I&amp;#39;m from Bangkok.&lt;br /&gt;I like to play Badminton and football because it very fun and eazy to play. I like Japannees food,&lt;br /&gt;Chinese food and Thai food. I have a sister she is 11 years old and I stay with my family. I study&lt;br /&gt;sofamore at CRU univercity. In a free time I like to read a cartoon books and play computer games. I don&amp;#39;t know want to be in the future.&lt;div style="clear:both;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</description></item></channel></rss>