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<rss version="2.0" xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/" xmlns:slash="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/slash/" xmlns:wfw="http://wellformedweb.org/CommentAPI/"><channel><title>ESL Essay, Writing World</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/EslEssayWritingWorld/Forum9.htm</link><description>Post your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment or just read for fun.</description><dc:language>en</dc:language><generator>CSMOD (Build: 3260.39585)</generator><item><title>Re: When is the best time to be born?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WhenIsTheBestTimeToBeBorn/ghhqx/post.htm#537826</link><pubDate>Mon, 07 Jul 2008 15:24:48 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:537826</guid><dc:creator>julielai</dc:creator><slash:comments>0</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WhenIsTheBestTimeToBeBorn/ghhqx/post.htm#537826</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-537826.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>&lt;p&gt;&lt;BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;img src="/Themes/englishforums/images/icon-quote.gif"&gt; &lt;strong&gt;Anonymous&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt; 
&lt;h2&gt;When is the best time to be born?&lt;/h2&gt;
&lt;h2&gt;&lt;strike&gt;As the time past lifestyle changes as a result of advancement in technology&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;and also new laws. In addition different generations have different cultures due to new ideas that come into play everyday.&lt;/strike&gt;&lt;/h2&gt;
&lt;h2&gt;Some people believe it &lt;font color="#999999"&gt;was&lt;/font&gt; better if we ha&lt;font color="#ff0000"&gt;ve&lt;/font&gt; been born in the past. One reason &lt;u&gt;is &lt;/u&gt;that &lt;strike&gt;they express is that&lt;/strike&gt; although advancement in technology help&lt;u&gt;s&lt;/u&gt; us &lt;strike&gt;to&lt;/strike&gt; get rid of some boring &lt;strike&gt;and&lt;/strike&gt; &lt;strike&gt;labor&lt;/strike&gt; activities, it &lt;u&gt;creates a &lt;/u&gt;new kind of difficulties which are more complex for human&lt;u&gt;s&lt;/u&gt; to face and endure, &lt;u&gt;and &lt;/u&gt;they bring &lt;strike&gt;examples like&lt;/strike&gt; new kind&lt;u&gt;s&lt;/u&gt; of diseases &lt;font color="#ff0000"&gt;or systematic and machine like lifestyle&lt;/font&gt;. (rephrase)&lt;/h2&gt;
&lt;h2&gt;Another reason &lt;strike&gt;they argue&lt;/strike&gt; is that advancement in technology lead&lt;u&gt;s&lt;/u&gt; to &lt;em&gt;&lt;u&gt;the &lt;/u&gt;&lt;/em&gt;destruction of &lt;u&gt;our &lt;/u&gt;environment&lt;u&gt;.&lt;/u&gt; &lt;u&gt;Some say it &lt;/u&gt;will lead to &lt;u&gt;the &lt;/u&gt;extinction of human&lt;u&gt;s &lt;/u&gt;&lt;strike&gt;like other species&lt;/strike&gt;.&lt;/h2&gt;
&lt;h2&gt;But I &lt;u&gt;do &lt;/u&gt;not &lt;u&gt;have &lt;/u&gt;such a negative point of view&lt;u&gt;.&lt;/u&gt; I believe living in &lt;u&gt;the &lt;/u&gt;future should be more interesting. I believe &lt;u&gt;technological &lt;/u&gt;advancement is brightening the future more and more. It &lt;u&gt;helps &lt;/u&gt;us live more comfortably &lt;strike&gt;and having less engagemen&lt;/strike&gt;t.&lt;/h2&gt;
&lt;h2&gt;In my opinion although technology may&amp;nbsp;&lt;u&gt;come&lt;/u&gt; with some difficulties it would &lt;u&gt;also solve some of our problems&lt;/u&gt;.&lt;/h2&gt;We have seen that technology may improve lifestyle and make it easier; however, it may bring some difficulties too.To sum up I believe advancement in technology have &lt;strike&gt;much&lt;/strike&gt; more advantages &lt;strike&gt;for human bei&lt;/strike&gt;ng than disadvantages and as &lt;u&gt;a &lt;/u&gt;result I think living in &lt;u&gt;the &lt;/u&gt;future is much more interesting.&amp;nbsp;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt; 
&lt;div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;div style="clear:both;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</description></item><item><title>When is the best time to be born?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WhenIsTheBestTimeToBeBorn/ghdjz/post.htm</link><pubDate>Fri, 04 Jul 2008 04:50:18 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:536542</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><slash:comments>1</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WhenIsTheBestTimeToBeBorn/ghdjz/post.htm</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-536542.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>&lt;h2&gt;When is the best time to be born?&lt;/h2&gt; &lt;h2&gt;As the time past lifestyle changes as a result of advancement in technology&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;and also new laws. In addition different generations have different cultures due to new ideas that come into play everyday.&lt;/h2&gt; &lt;h2&gt;Some people believe it was better if we have been born in the past. One reason that they express is that although advancement in technology help us to get rid of some boring and labor activities, it bring with itself new kind of difficulties which are more complex for human to face and endure, they bring examples like new kind of diseases or systematic and machine like lifestyle.&lt;/h2&gt; &lt;h2&gt;Another reason they argue is that advancement in technology lead to destruction of environment, they say human is so selfish that they donât even bother destroying environment and finally it will lead to extinction of human body like other species.&lt;/h2&gt; &lt;h2&gt;But I have not such a negative point of view, I believe living in future should be more interesting. I believe advancement in technology is brightening the future more and more. It help us live more comfortably and having less engagement.&lt;/h2&gt; &lt;h2&gt;In my opinion although technology may bring with itself some difficulties it would bring the solution for them too.&lt;/h2&gt; &lt;h2&gt;We have seen that technology may improve lifestyle and make it easier; however, it may bring some difficulties too.&lt;/h2&gt; &lt;h2&gt;To sum up I believe advancement in technology have much more advantages for human being than disadvantages and as result I think living in future is much more interesting. &lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/h2&gt; &lt;h2&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/h2&gt; &lt;h3&gt;I would appreciate everybody who bother himself and have look at my article, your advices would be of great importance for me.&lt;/h3&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;h3&gt;thank you very much,&lt;/h3&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;h3&gt;Sadeq Morshedloo.&lt;/h3&gt;&lt;div style="clear:both;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</description></item></channel></rss>