http://www.englishforums.com/English/EslEssayWritingWorld/Forum9.htmPost your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment or just read for fun.enCSMOD (Build: 3260.39585)http://www.englishforums.com/English/ProofreadingNeeded/ghjqr/post.htm#538390Tue, 08 Jul 2008 15:35:54 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:538390changeling0http://www.englishforums.com/English/ProofreadingNeeded/ghjqr/post.htm#538390http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-538390.xmlThanks a lot!<div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/ProofreadingNeeded/ghjnw/post.htm#538347Tue, 08 Jul 2008 14:38:29 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:538347RayH1http://www.englishforums.com/English/ProofreadingNeeded/ghjnw/post.htm#538347http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-538347.xml<br />Every now and then you will want to enjoy a whole chunk of baked meat. First, you should learn about making your meat soft and tender instead of dry and tough <strike>one</strike>. The top tip for a succulent baked ham is the right marinating process. It&#39;s better to buy fresh<span style="color:#ff0000;">,</span> <strike>and</strike> low-fat ham. To make it really tasty <strike><span style="color:#ff40ff;"></span></strike>try to get cooled meat, not frozen <strike>one</strike>. Make this dish for <span style="color:#ff0000;">a</span> Christmas party when the whole family gathers around the table. Your family and friends will eat it up! (will eat heartily? Could you suggest any idioms to say “to enjoy meal”) <span style="color:#ff0000;">I think &quot;eat it up&quot; express your intent quite well.</span><br /><br />I might replace &quot;top tip&quot; with &quot;most important tip&quot; it reads a little more smoothly.<br /><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/ProofreadingNeeded/ghjkh/post.htmTue, 08 Jul 2008 13:17:16 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:538295changeling2http://www.englishforums.com/English/ProofreadingNeeded/ghjkh/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-538295.xmlHi everybody!<br /><br />Could you, please, check my grammar and vocabulary in the following sentences? <br /><br />Every now and then you will want to enjoy a whole chunk of baked meat. First, you should learn about making your meat soft and tender instead of dry and tough one. The top tip for a succulent baked ham is the right marinating process. It&#39;s better to buy fresh and low-fat ham. To make it really tasty, try to get cooled meat, not frozen one. Make this dish for Christmas party when the whole family gathers around the table. Your family and friends will eat it up! (will eat heartily? Could you suggest any idioms to say “to enjoy meal”)<br /><br /><br /><br />Thanks in advance<br /><br /><br /><div style="clear:both;"></div>