Re: Are these sentences correct?

nona the brit — Wed, 09 Jul 2008 12:20:51 GMT

I've underlined the problems for you.

Last class I have chanced met my class. She is a lovely girl and pretty gril. Her name is Haruthai Chansawang. Her nickname is Kao. She is senior of English program. She said, she loves English language so she chose this program that the same me. She said again, she doesn't excellent English but she tried and praticed one day she could better.

Now she lives in Bangkok with her roommate at apartment behide university. She said why she must stay behide university that because it is convenient for go to study early. That right I agree with her so much but she said,sometime she don't have money enough for use that because she use money a lot before it is due.

She was born at Songkla province and she movedto Bangkok when she was 13 years old. Then she lived with her cousin.

In her free time she goes to shopping at JJ market and reads a book. Her favorite colour is orange and most her appliances are orange colour. She told me, she likes to listen Korea music because she likes band of Korea so much.

While I intreveiwed her, she looks friendly, funny and smile all the times. The last words she said to me, she hopeful to finish education and she hopes to work in a job that she dreams.

Are these sentences correct?

Anonymous — Tue, 08 Jul 2008 16:00:09 GMT

I want to know where my mistakes are. If so, please help me edit or correct them. Thank you.
Last class I have chanced met my class. She is a lovely girl and pretty gril. Her name is Haruthai Chansawang. Her nickname is Kao. She is senior of English program. She said, she loves English language so she chose this program that the same me. She said again, she doesn't excellent English but she tried and praticed one day she could better.

She was born at Songkla province and she movedto Bangkok when she was 13 years old. Then she lived with her cousin.

While I intreveiwed her, she looks friendly, funny and smile all the times. The last words she said to me, she hopeful to finish education and she hopes to work in a job that she dreams.

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Re: Are these sentences correct?

Are these sentences correct?