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Re: Check my writing's mistakes,please

Tanit — Thu, 10 Jul 2008 19:10:09 GMT

Hi,

I have merged your threads because you posted the same essay twice (the one you've just posted was the third one in the original post).
Instead of re-posting the same essays, you could try to correct some mistakes which have been highlighted for you, as Clive suggested.

Check my writing's mistakes,please

Anonymous — Thu, 10 Jul 2008 18:35:43 GMT

My Classmate

My classmate's name is Kwanruen Somphanphae her nick name is L . She comes from Bangkok. She is single and live with her brother. She is a Buddhism. She lives in Lamlookka 2 years. She is study English 16 years .She is study English because she would like to speak excellent.This now she is study major Business English in CRU university.She like to playsports
such as basketball , badminton , swim . In a free time she like to read book. In weekends she like to go shopping with her friends. In future she want to be a guide.

Re: Correct our paragraphs please

Clive — Tue, 08 Jul 2008 17:24:36 GMT

Hi,
I've marked in red some errors that you need to think about and try to correct.

Actually, I corrected the first work, and then found that the other paragraphs have similar errors. Why don't you all try to correct these together, or discuss them with your teacher? After that, you can correct them and post them here again.

Best wishes, Clive

Natthinan's work

My classmate's name is Sumaitri Nuamto and she nickname is Tik. She from Chaiyaphum is a province in Thailand. She arrived inthe Bangkok 4 years ago. She isa single and live in Bodin sweet home, Latpao. She length of time studying 10 years ago. She studying Business English program at Chandrakasem Rajabhat Univercity. She like going to shopping andIn her free time she like playing computer and reading books. She want to be . . English Teacher because it's interested and an exiting.

Sumaitree's work

My classmate's name is Natthinan Koettisong. She nickname is Aom.
She comes from Roi-ed,a small city in Thailand. She arrived in the
Bangkok two years ago. She staying Klongtoei. She is single and live
with her best family. She is studying Business English Program at
Chandrakasem Rajabhat University . She is period of time in studying
English ten year ago. She have reasons for studying English because
She have a partiality for English language and she think English
language for universal. She want to be a receptionish. She hobbies
read book and watch TV. She plans for the future to continue one's
studies for to a master's degree.

Apiwat's work

My Classmate

Correct our paragraphs please

Anonymous — Tue, 08 Jul 2008 16:18:37 GMT

Natthinan's work

My classmate's name is Sumaitri Nuamto and she nickname is Tik. She from Chaiyaphum is a province in Thailand. She arrived in the Bangkok 4 years ago. She is a single and live in Bodin sweet home, Latpao. She length of time studying 10 years ago. She studying Business English program at Chandrakasem Rajabhat Univercity. She like going to shopping and In her free time she like playing computer and reading books. She want to be English Teacher because it's interested and an exiting.

Sumaitree's work

My classmate's name is Natthinan Koettisong. She nickname is Aom.
She comes from Roi-ed,a small city in Thailand. She arrived in the
Bangkok two years ago. She staying Klongtoei. She is single and live
with her best family. She is studying Business English Program at
Chandrakasem Rajabhat University . She is period of time in studying
English ten year ago. She have reasons for studying English because
She have a partiality for English language and she think English
language for universal. She want to be a receptionish. She hobbies
read book and watch TV. She plans for the future to continue one's
studies for to a master's degree.

Apiwat's work

My Classmate