http://www.englishforums.com/English/EslEssayWritingWorld/Forum9.htmPost your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment or just read for fun.enCSMOD (Build: 3260.39585)http://www.englishforums.com/English/ParagraphProofreading/ghpxp/post.htm#540105Fri, 11 Jul 2008 19:23:53 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:540105Mr Wordy0http://www.englishforums.com/English/ParagraphProofreading/ghpxp/post.htm#540105http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-540105.xml<p>There are some things that need tidying as far as the of use of English is concerned, but, more importantly,&nbsp;the overall meaning of what you&#39;ve written isn&#39;t coherent to me.</p> <p>I don&#39;t understand what this drowning&nbsp;story has to do with the &quot;meaning of push-up&quot; or its “etymologic source”. I&#39;m wondering if something has been lost in translation: an association that works with the Chinese word for &quot;push-up&quot; but not the English?</p><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/ParagraphProofreading/ghpvx/post.htmFri, 11 Jul 2008 14:29:09 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:539934Ofrienfdragon1http://www.englishforums.com/English/ParagraphProofreading/ghpvx/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-539934.xmldeleted<br /><br /><strong>Reason:&nbsp; Proofreading has been done and I don&#39;t want to&nbsp;waste your time.<br /></strong><br /><br />Thank you all.<div style="clear:both;"></div>