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<?xml-stylesheet type="text/xsl" href="http://www.englishforums.com/utility/FeedStylesheets/rss.xsl" media="screen"?><rss version="2.0" xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/" xmlns:slash="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/slash/" xmlns:wfw="http://wellformedweb.org/CommentAPI/"><channel><title>Essay, Report &amp; Composition Writing</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htm</link><description>Post your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment, or just read for fun.</description><dc:language>en</dc:language><generator>XMOD (Build: 3607.32596)</generator><item><title>Re: Can someone proofread this essays ?Please?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CanSomeoneProofreadEssays/ldqj/post.htm#55296</link><pubDate>Sun, 22 Mar 2009 18:59:37 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:55296</guid><dc:creator>anon1</dc:creator><slash:comments>0</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CanSomeoneProofreadEssays/ldqj/post.htm#55296</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-55296.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Did you ever get your job as a food server? Please view post 50454.      I just learned a lesson here today. Normally, I will provide much more help to a person seeking a job. Earning an income and having a chance at a greater opportunity is important. Thus, I am willing to provide "extra" help. But if it is homework, I like to see the student do the heavy lifting.  I appreciate the thank you. When I don't receive a thank you, I am less inclined to assist the next time that person asks a question.  You're welcome.  MountainHiker</description></item><item><title>Re: Can someone proofread this essays ?Please?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CanSomeoneProofreadEssays/ldqj/post.htm#55241</link><pubDate>Fri, 22 May 2009 17:59:37 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:55241</guid><dc:creator>Pawcio</dc:creator><slash:comments>1</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CanSomeoneProofreadEssays/ldqj/post.htm#55241</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-55241.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Hi MountainHiker, ..................................................................................................... " Hi,   Did you ever get your job as a food server? Please view post 50454.   MountainHiker " ....................................................................................................  That was just my english assignment but thank you for asking.  ....................................................................................................  Thank You for helping me with the essay ... I will try to work on my 2nd essay more</description></item><item><title>Re: Can someone proofread this essays ?Please?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CanSomeoneProofreadEssays/ldqj/post.htm#55198</link><pubDate>Sun, 22 Feb 2009 18:59:37 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:55198</guid><dc:creator>anon1</dc:creator><slash:comments>2</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CanSomeoneProofreadEssays/ldqj/post.htm#55198</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-55198.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Pawcio,  We don't provide proofreading services here. Please Post:46522 .  MountainHiker    Some people think adulthood is determined by age by age, physical maturity or emotional qualities. The values that make a person an adult are wisdom, attitude, and responsibility. Being mature person does not just happened over night.    Wisdom is the first quality that a mature person has. It is the knowledge that we encompass from past experience and how we learn from those experiences. Both bad and good. We learn from everyday life. We learned from past mistake so we will not make them again. An adult person also does not use his wisdom to just have it for himself. They help other in needs and care.   The most important quality for...</description></item><item><title>Re: Can someone proofread this essays ?Please?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CanSomeoneProofreadEssays/ldqj/post.htm#55194</link><pubDate>Fri, 22 May 2009 17:59:37 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:55194</guid><dc:creator>anon1</dc:creator><slash:comments>3</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CanSomeoneProofreadEssays/ldqj/post.htm#55194</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-55194.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Hi,  Did you ever get your job as a food server? Please Post:50454 .  MountainHiker</description></item><item><title>Can someone proofread this essays ?Please?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CanSomeoneProofreadEssays/ldqj/post.htm</link><pubDate>Sun, 22 Mar 2009 18:59:37 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:55191</guid><dc:creator>Pawcio</dc:creator><slash:comments>4</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CanSomeoneProofreadEssays/ldqj/post.htm</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-55191.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>1st Essay,   Some people think adulthood is determined by age by age, physical maturity or emotional qualities. The values that make a person an adult are wisdom, attitude, and responsibility. Being mature person does not just happened over night.  Wisdom is the first quality that a mature person has. It is the knowledge that we encompass from past experience and how we learn from those experiences. Both bad and good. We learn from everyday life. We learned from past mistake so we will not make them again. An adult person also does not use his wisdom to just have it for himself. They help other in needs and care.  The second quality of an adult person is the attitude. Attitude is very important in adult life. A mature person has...</description></item></channel></rss>