http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htmPost your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment, or just read for fun.enXMOD (Build: 3607.32596)http://www.englishforums.com/English/CanSomeoneEditEssays/glrjq/post.htm#557613Thu, 22 Jan 2009 21:43:41 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:557613Anonymous0http://www.englishforums.com/English/CanSomeoneEditEssays/glrjq/post.htm#557613http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-557613.xmlthank you very much for helping me edit my essay =)http://www.englishforums.com/English/CanSomeoneEditEssays/glrjq/post.htm#556789Sun, 22 Mar 2009 21:43:41 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:556789phamthephong1001http://www.englishforums.com/English/CanSomeoneEditEssays/glrjq/post.htm#556789http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-556789.xmlHello Davidzhaos, I can not find and correct all the mistake in your essay, i hope this can help In US today, one of the most significant issues we are facing is the automobile. Currently automobile produces the second largest amount of CO2 gas, the leading cause of environment damage and the cause of oil crisis we are experiencing today. It is said that necessity is the mother of invention. Well, one of today greatest necessit ies is the need to replace conventional gasoline automobile and as result I would like to invent an eclectic power car that just do that. By using electricity rather than gasoline, my new electric automobile will solve both the environment problems and oil crisis cause by conventional automobile. ...http://www.englishforums.com/English/CanSomeoneEditEssays/glrjq/post.htmThu, 22 Jan 2009 21:43:41 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:555338davidzhaos2http://www.englishforums.com/English/CanSomeoneEditEssays/glrjq/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-555338.xmlhi can someone help me edit two essays? 1. If you could invent one useful thing for humankind, what would it be? Describe the invention and its impact. In US today, one of the most significant issues we are facing is the automobile . Currently automobile produces the second largest amount of CO2 gas, the leading cause of environment damage and is cause oil crisis we are experiencing today. It is said that necessity is the mother of invention. Well, one of today greatest necessity is the need to replace conventional gasoline automobile and as result I would like to invent a eclectic power car that just do that. By using electricity rather than gasoline, my new electric automobile will solve both the environment problems and oil...